My question? How did Dagur even speak with a broken jaw and no tongue. Wouldn’t it have been like moans and gurgling.

I wouldn't've come! He just fought with these people and nearly killed them! I don't think thag they'll just say: "Welcome back buddy! uwu" xD

how old are you cause this is the best I have read in 3years.

she is into some really kinky Shit, chocked, cut, pinched, played n a whole lot

some kinky Shit here

Well, this was an interesting read ;)

I am in a love hate relationship with this fic! first off I'm not a fan of the reason he turned into a violent bad ass, never been a fan of the idea of rape so theres the hate part done. now I love this thing for so many more reasons! I love how hiccup is a bad ass! I even love his violent acts and the torture ideas are well thought out and awesomely evil! I even like how Astrid turned to enjoying his evil side! and the last explination about the warrior already liking it any way is a great way to rationalize it not being a far stretch! well thought out and well planed so well freaking done!

Triggered you're writing this awesome story. I was bullied and hurt by my mother. If this story triggered someone then they should have never read this story. A good story should teach all emotions. Maybe the triggered need to learn life is not fair and grow a pair. You should not have to apologise for your story

good job

i have been waiting forever for this story to be updated, a little sad that the last chapter was so short but at it is over and there is some closure. maybe throw in a few epilogues?

Shits about to get real! Is it bad that I am like astrid? Plz say no.

Awesome story

Your version of Dark Hiccup is amazing also I wouldn't be surprised if Hiccup and Astrid were into bdsm shit like that seeing their bloodlust anyway great writing

MAD_Maarty

I kind of like how you do Hiccstrid. The conflicts don't focus on Hiccup and Astrid and everything in between. They're more external, like Hiccup and Astrid vs the world. Another plus is I'm not drowning in angst half the time. Not to mention the fact you've been able to keep the smut interesting through the entire story.

Wow. That was... Violent. Perfect! Seriously it's really hard to find dark hiccup fics. They're more realsitc. Luv the story keep going!