Reviews for Between Breaths
Agiani chapter 5 . 6/19
Great fic. I definitely want to see more of this.
SilverLiningSheep chapter 5 . 2/18/2019
Darn it! That's it so far!? Rats! I loved this and I hope an update comes soon! Ladrien is my favourite ship by far. It's so soft and so gentle, yet reading this... oh man. Now I know just how deliciously sinful it can be! Excellent work! Your writing is superb! The descriptions were flawless and I never wanted it to end! Super hot!
kittyisaflirt chapter 1 . 2/15/2019
wooooooow. sinful much. I know there was no actual sex but still. It's hard to believe that marinette has no problem making out with adrien when she is ladybug but can't talk to him as mari. This was great writing good job.
twenthrd chapter 5 . 10/22/2018
This is an amazing fanfic! This is actually the best ladrien fanfic I have ever read! This is a ship that is constantly looked over due to other popular ships like Ladynoir and Marichat meaning that its content (fan art, fanfics etc) aren't as good but this is fantastic! I would love to see an update from you to see how this story filled with drama and lust ends.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/17/2018
update? please?
Guest chapter 5 . 12/30/2017
Gurlll update we all love reading your stop now.️
Luciester chapter 5 . 6/7/2017
I loved this so much! please update ASAP -
Guest chapter 5 . 6/3/2017
...so...does marinette know? I find it hilarious that technically marinette ws taking advantage of her friend Adrien as ladybug thinking Adrien was starstruck by ladybug...yet if she actually did realize he's chat she'll find out that Adrien is actually been in love with ladybug this whole time and has seen her bad sides and good sides in equal messare and is one of her closest friends that she can actually talk to. At least she'll know his feelings for her are very very real. plus she doesn't have to feel that guilty because chat was taking advantage of her not knowig his idetaty to ask for kisses...but then again it would not only be her taking advantage of Adrien's feelings for her, but it would be taking advantage of chat's feelings for her...hmmm...but then again Adrien knows ladybug has no interet in chat nor from her constantly pushing aside his affections. marinette has no idea how Adrien feels about marinette...well...she at least know knows he thinks she's cute enough to try to impress and flirt with s chat noir(princess). tikki must have had a field day about mari abusing her powers to make out with him XD I love both nino and Adrien bonding over their girl confusion...I wonder how mari is going to feel know she not only has been cockblocking herself this whole time but she has been rejecting the love of her life for AGE! XD ohhh the devious irony! at least marinette will have wonderful material to keep her nights entertaining from now on. do you think she'll find the fact she can turn the 'suave' chat noir into a puddle so easily even hotter along with the fact he's Adrien. She not only marked up Adrien, she marked up her kitty cat. marinette has quite the possessive streak in the show...and clearly likes claiming him for herself. I kindof really want to see this whole thing from her perspective now...do yoou think in your spare time you might redue this fic from her point of view? or maybe just do a chapter about marinette's perspective of the aftermath of the whole trip. she seemed to make making out with Adrien a habbit. how long do you think she'll last before she can't help herself. Adrien has always been her weakness and knowing he's chat noir just makes him so accesable and easy to have. He's just screaming for her to take him~
Brooke A chapter 5 . 11/4/2016
Is this the end of the story? Or are you going to post more in the future?
Brooke A chapter 1 . 11/3/2016
Wow. This story is amazing. Wonderful storyboard and amazing vocabulary and fantastic imagery. I love reading this story so much! Good job. One question...what do you mean by, "...and the way he was leaning backwards, somewhat sitting on the small of his back. Oh yea, she definitly did that." Lol I'm going to sound like a 10 year old girl for a moment, but what did she do?

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trisdivergent18.25.21 chapter 5 . 8/18/2016
That was a cute story!
Yamina20 chapter 5 . 6/18/2016
I hope you either write another Chapter or a sequel to this fanfic. I love it and feel it would be a shame for it to just end like this. T_T This is a definite fav of mine. :)
Poptarts4Daze chapter 2 . 6/13/2016
The song is "Bring Me To Life" not Wake Me Up, unless your talking about "Wake Me Up" by Avicii, not really important but I felt the need to point that out, uh, er, I… sorry…
Catbug chapter 5 . 6/12/2016
NO NO NOOOO CLIFFHANGER (;;)
333WaterBaby333 chapter 4 . 4/3/2016
I'm crying. This is everything that I could've hoped for. I live for Adrien fucking up. The pet name. Falling into the bay. Everything is wonderful. Also for Adrien hanging onto Ladybug while they went through the air, a good alternate would be "The rush was incredible, a constant fear that if he fell there would be no magical suit to protect him, as well as the almost constant boner."
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