I am in love with this fic! Write more please!

Hey, a couple of spelling mistakes, but that's understandable with all the stress you must be having right now. Besides that, this is a really great story! I thank thee for the opportunity to read such a magnificent storyline.

Whoa dipper went genocide

Loving this story

MORE MORE MORE!

can you make another chapter please

I love this story even at it's infant state. The only small thing I want to advise is to avoid using chocolate or common foods to describe eyes or body color. Not a severe thing, just removes small cliches. Besides that, your story is amazing! Please keep it up

I wonder how they react that flowey remembers Dipper killed Toriel and then mocks him for it even though Dipper ment to knock her out not murder.

That ending really got me! The way they screamed in horror at the end was just perfect! Dipper crashing emotionally with Mabel unable to do anything with herself really made it hit home for him! It was even better when the truama turned into an desperation to make things right! Fantastic Chappy! ;3

I'm loving the story

Well that was cool NEAH HEH HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE I HAVE ONLY DISOVERD RECENTLY HOW TO GET CAPLOCK ON THE IPAD NEAH HEH HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE

I think it was really really cool!

you can actually rename chara since it's short for CHARActer

You cannot rename Chara. Chara is a proper name. Besides it could be short for something like Charlotte.

Great chapter! but I gotta tell you that her name is MABEL not MABLE XD