Good story please continue. I hope they get to Elrohir on time and I hope the cruel elflings parents punish them.

Aww, poor Elladan, and Elrohir was so brave and sweet! This was an awesome story, and I really enjoyed it. Keep writing!

This was so good! I would have loved to have Elrond find out exactly what those brats said to Elrohir! This has real potential to be a longer story and I hope you continue it. I am putting this in my community!

Awww, this story is adorable! You write the twins very well!

Kids can be so cruel, even elflings, apparently. Thank you for this story it was nice to read

The last sentence, where Elladan hugged Elrohir and was like "I'll be right here" had me grinning like an idiot. Great job!

Good job on this story! I can understand how there might well have been some amount of stigma, perhaps, against the twins because of their mortal blood. Good job capturing it here. Keep writing!
Blessings,
Sophia the Scribe

Naww! This was such a cute fic. I've never thought of elflings as being little snots before but man oh man you nearly had me in tears reading about poor Elrohir being taunted by tiny Rivendell bullies. I love that the Elrondions' bond is so strong. I'm squeeing here. Thank you so much for this adorable Dan-and-Ro read! :)

Ara

I loved this story! You are so good at writing fan Fiction!