Hey, just letting you know that I just resently gotten back into the wonderful anime that is known as Cowboy Bebop, and let me just tell you I love your fic! It's just so great! I can't help to notice that you have updated in a while either :( Please, you should reconsider! I, like many others, love this fic to pieces! Great work!

oops! i haven't reviewed yet, and i'm too lazy to go back wo chapters. .

awesome AWESOME story so far! ;D

Gah,

or Wow,

or holy Shit

As having just completed reading this story in one sitting tonight, these were the words that first came to my mind. It an extremely engaging piece of fiction.

The characters, while at first glace seem a bit OOC, are actually very complex and well done. You did a great job getting into their heads where applyed to the circumstanses. None of the characters are strong and stead and stalwart. They all bend and change and adapt to live, and I think that's what brings a special sense of realism to the piece. Yet, even though they are clearly changed people, you really stayed true to the root of the characters from the show. Fab job!

Oh oh the plot now! So its not you average post-RFB fic, I'll give you that. The shocking character deaths and re-appearances are really what set it most apart from the norm. That and the fact that Faye fell in love again and got married. That was actually a nice change, because she is capable of existing outside of Spike. Too bad it ended so sadly. Now, while the death of Jet was sad and tragic, I think for me the death of Ein was more painful(I'm weird like that). Really it was a double death, because it signified the end of the old Ed. She was amazing by the way. While the "issuse with the Syndicate" speil is not exactly new or original, it was done really well and for a change, the focus was not related back to Spike of Faye, but started from someone else. Faye once again gets the short end of the stick though, its like Whitney all over again. Nice mix in or OC's to bring about a sense of truth.

So finally, that last chapter there. It really got to me ya know. I'm guessing when you wrote it, you already knew you were planning to abandon the fic. While sure, it doesn't complete the story and leaves you painfully waiting for more on the edge of your seat, it has a sense of closure as well. All the really necesarry questions about whats going on and who's who and how everyone ties together is answered. All that's really left to do is end the plot and bring the problem to a finite solution. For the ending action to happen. Each character gets an amlost vauge sort of ending. While I hate that you apparently aren't updating it anymore, the lack of completion won't constantly haunt me like some fics do, forever wondering where the author wanted to go with it and questiong motives and the like. It ends at a place that I feel comfortable coming to a conclusion in my own mind without having to fill in for the author. So it's sort of a Catch-22.

Anyways, superb story and I quite enjoyed reading it. It was dark and agnsty and ironically humorous, completely sutited to my taste and exactly what I was looking for. It's an impressive work and you wrote it extremly well. Sure I would love to see you finish it, but you do what ya gotta do. Just letting you know that it's still a fabulous and new people are still falling in love with your work. Major props! :D

I just read this all in one sitting!

Oh for the love of- Does nobody ever stay dead? I was shocked over and over again at how everyone was connected and how nobody ever seemed to die. Julia is still alive and now out of sheer annoyance im starting to think the dark figure "miss Valentine" person is Vicious. It would make sense in the chaos of this story. I love it of course. Dark, manipulative, secretive. Great story! You must finish it! It's too good to leave it there! Now... If only Jet reappeared and the dog miraculously survived?

are you kidding me? that awesome story then NOTHING? no continuation? Im pissed

yeah, ur gonna have to finish this fic...and soon please! its really one of the best bebop fics out there. im dieing to know what happens so please update (i know its been like a year but i really desperatly want to know the end!). thanks :).

What a wonderful cliffhanger! This is one of my more favorite CB fics. Yet another storyline but I've been waiting for to finish. Keep up the great work, and can't wait for more!

Wow this is really good i love the way you write it is very beautiful can't wait for the next chap

You better update this story - and soon! b/c i love it - really it's amazing.

lots of luv,

and PLEASE PLEASE update,

keito

Wonderful twists and such a wonderful plot.

I enjoyed reading this and I like your writing. I hope you'll continue soon because I'm dying to know what will happen next. I can't wait to see more Spike and Faye interactions and the little reunion between Spike, Faye, and Ed.

It's sad to see Jet out of the picture and dead from the start, but you've got me wondering on what this story will lead to.

Update soon _.

Wow! This is realy good so far! I love the way you've characterised spike! _

oss wow haha that was great

GASP and julia is still alive -.-

this would cause many problems ne? hahhaha anyways

wow -.- YAY! ed is talking like her oldself again -.- hahahaha

hehe anyways this was a really good fic and i hope you update soon again

till the next update

BYEBYE

Gr... update soon! Lol, I love your story! It's so... unique and different than other Spike return and falls in love with Faye stories. And I can't wait for Ed to be reunited with them... if she is... and I just can't wait for the next chapter! Now! Now I say! lol, lub's ya xoxo

evil-bunny-leader

The way you work with all the characters, specialy Ed is amazing. I love this story not for any other reasone other than its a good piece of writing. Pleeaassee update sooner than later cause this story makes me happy ( in a torcherouse melancholy way)