You ended it before we knew if she actually went up to his room or, if she chickened out in the lobby . . . again in the elevator . . . again on the fifth floor. Before the sexy times, if she made it up there. I wanted to throttle Jake. I’m thinking the majority of her self esteem issues are from him belittling her constantly. Just to ensure he had a warm wet, dark place to fall when he was done with the others. What an ass. At least Edward saw past everything and saw her. We won’t ever know if it was more than a one night stand.

Im kinda falling in love with your fanfics and the way you write them. Please, continue this and them, and everyone you have.
Kisses

:-)

Oh man, I wish you were still writing so you could have turned this one shot into a fic. This was so cute. Totally want more.

PLEASE tell me there's more

Nice one! Thanks for writing this!

I will give you my first born... pls continue

Jesus Christ, please continue this. I'm begging you.

more please!

This was great, now... MORE MORE MORE

I NEED MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

This could very well be the beginning of a beautiful, hilarious story(hint, hint). Just my opinion and because I am a sucker for great beginnings like this.

Interesting

haha she'd better get her ass up to that hotel room! jake is a total fuckwit and i'm so glad bella rejected his arrogant ass. and she needs to tell him to fuck off and never ever come back! mmm the chemistry between her and edward is pretty toxic in a very good way!

That was fun.