Continue first and then later on do a rewrite. Once this story is completed, then you can fully think about how you would do things differently in another version or alternate universe/realm of a similar story with a rewrite.

Hello, all! I'd like to thank Ashabel for letting me beta this story! I'll be working quick as I can, so for those of you flaming about grammar and such, PM me and don't post it in your review here. Ashabel doesn't need that anymore, if you have any complaints on a strictly grammar related basis, please come to me.

Please keep going. You can also rewrite it when this is finished sometime in future.

continue

The story is perfect contiue as is

Keep writing this one

Bro keep it going for your first fic this is enjoyable to read (in my opinion)

I'd vote continue partly because I love this fic as it is flaws and all and partly because it would make an interesting read to see how it differs between the current chapters and future ones.

contiue story

up to you.. though i would hv preferred that you just continue it instead of rewriting it

Interesting story. I reread the whole thing. Other than interesting spelling everything is fine. Thank you for sharing your imagination.

I've always been a big fan of your stories, I would personally say rewrite and fix the grammar issues. also maybe slow down the beginning as it feels a little rushed. personally I think the first chapter could be expanded a bit. but other then that I still enjoy your stories.

why not leave this version and rewrite a new one. so you and others could go back and see how both changed and evolved as a story?

please continue

Rewrite