Reviews for Soul of the Clock
Guest chapter 21 . 4/1
Fun fanfic so far. Can't say how well it reflects canon events, but I enjoy it regardless. Hope you enjoy writing it
Lordlexx chapter 14 . 4/1
She should be replaced with Mira.. She's barely a side character...
Lordlexx chapter 11 . 4/1
I was not expecting that... because that was a shit filler arc that wasn't canon... the Infinity Clock wasn't canon either but you clearly needed it as a plot device so its forgivable. Also... your Harry is going deeper and deeper into "anime protagonist" territory. It is not good. And it's getting less and less "Harry" like.

I also once again bring to your attention the magical transportation method called 'apparation'. Also, magical exhaustion is not actually a canon thing. Entirely fanon. Well for the Harry Potter world. Evolution clearly changed that notion when it changed into the Fairy Tail world.
Lordlexx chapter 10 . 4/1
And now Harry is acting like some protagonist in a high school anime... he had an eon or two to grow the fuck up..
Lordlexx chapter 8 . 4/1
Is apparation not a thing? Why is your Harry having some very anime like responses? Also... Kosmos? Really?
Lordlexx chapter 6 . 4/1
Ugh... weak Harry...
Lordlexx chapter 5 . 4/1
I'd be far more a fan of Harry and Mira...
Lordlexx chapter 4 . 4/1
I'm more confused as to why silent casting isn't used more in these fics... As for "sticking with the wiki".. that's a bit against you saying "it's about intent". I firmly believe that the incantations and wand movements are just a focusing practice and a wand is just a tool designed to better focus you magical energies.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/29
I only watched the first 50 or so episodes of Fairy Tail, so I find it amusing to be nearly as in the dark as Harry is. Nice fanfic start, at least, assuming this won't just ride the rails of canon (even if I've yet to watch it).
Jostanos chapter 21 . 3/29
*chuckles* I half expected Harry to adopt the two waifs in their aunt wasn't up to snuff.
If there a chance that Koza and San's Auntie may ask Harry and his Fairy Tail Guild mates to take her nephews with them? *shrugs* Just a thought.
Kyrianae Narii chapter 21 . 3/29
... An eye inside a pyramid? Illuminati confirmed.
AliceCullen3 chapter 21 . 3/29
LOVE IT!
Sceonn chapter 20 . 3/27
You made the opponent too strong.
AliceCullen3 chapter 20 . 3/27
LOVE IT!
Jostanos chapter 20 . 3/27
Kanathia, YOU PASS! *eye smiles*

I do have a question for you: With the ring and the lady gone, what may happen to Koza now?
May Koza return to his normal form? May Koza not only become a hybrid of the two forms but also keep his human mind and the abilities of whatever he had become?
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