Reviews for Fall to Zenith
Jose19 chapter 2 . 4/25
I am confused here because Sona is the Heir of Sitri not Harry, and she is adored by Serafall.
Thallion chapter 4 . 4/25
You do remember that as a Devil Harry can now speak and understand All languages, including magical ones, due to the Language skill of Devil kind, right?
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 1 . 3/9
not a challenge, just me citing a plot idea i really wish someone would attempt. harry potter as the host of Ddraig and the Boosted gear. with Issei instead the host to a mutant Twice Critical. it RESEMBLES the Boosted Gear on the Surface, and can even form a basic armor as its Balance Breaker, but it can only boost a maximum of 10 times, and lacks all the other powers of the Boosted Gear.

basically i a trying to find a fic where harry replaces Issei for the most part, but without killing the bastard off.

oh, and harry has to have basically mastered Boosted Gear by the time he enters Kuoh, which means it needs to manifest early, and he needs to be training with it throughout his hogwarts years.

again, this is not a challenge to Quartermass, i do not wish to have my head removed from its shoulders via a PM, this is me venting an idea into the aether for anyone to take and play with.

once again, NOT A CHALLENGE! i'm just trying to get an idea out of my head so i focus on other things.
Lordlexx chapter 6 . 2/24
I really don't think Luna is Queen worthy. Shes intelligent and thinks outside the box, but when I think 'Queen' I think 'heavy hitter'. That is not a defining characteristic of Luna. Also, why does Hermione have so many wings already. I'd figure it'd be a maturity and power level thing to govern those.

King: Harry
Queen: ? (personally I'd use Hermione but I guess you want her to do be her Fallen stuff)
Bishop 1: Ravel Phenex
Bishop 2: Kuroka
Knight 1: Sirius
Knight 2: Neville
Rook 1/2: Fred/George
Pawn 1: Luna
Pawn 2: Dobby
Pawn 3-8: ?
sondowth chapter 7 . 12/19/2019
And Voldemort went out with not a bang but a whimper.
kirosyamcha chapter 8 . 10/4/2019
That’s a trash thing to do to his family’s fortune, also won’t he need money to actually live in Japan or at least to buy things? After all just because my cousins are rich I don’t usually expect that to make me rich so why would Harry give away most of his vaults? Doesn’t make sense at all no matter what you say or excuse made it’s silly.
kirosyamcha chapter 2 . 10/4/2019
Ohh god your basically giving him the trash peerage Luna is fine at least she usually has seer abilities but the rest? 2 old half broken people and 1 barely teen mr stutters
Chyllen chapter 17 . 9/25/2019
The only thing I don't get is since when did Kokabiel know anything about putting souls in to body's and even so would not Levi-Tan put fail safes on her toys ehh just saying it would be the smart thing to do considering the were thinking conniving people at one point
Chyllen chapter 2 . 9/24/2019
Well no fucking shit you broke him you inconsiderate ass
Lordlexx chapter 5 . 9/14/2019
I'm having serious trouble seeing Luna as a queen. Queens are supposed to be powerhouses, spectacular talent for a type of magic, sacred gear, ect. Luna is intelligent, good with off the wall spell work, and your own version of a limited seer. Not to mention her off the wall personality. A queen should be able to advise, not confused the living shit out of you.

I get its your story and you're gonna do it your way, but my honest critique is that that particular bit doesn't mesh well.
Lahmikhara chapter 17 . 5/8/2019
I really liked this story, good job on it! xD
Jose19 chapter 1 . 3/9/2019
I am surprised that no Harem will be given to Harry since 90 percent of all Devils practice Polygamy, and it is legal in their world.

The father of Rias has a large Harem to start, and is managed by Venelala.

The issue is how powerful is Harry the power scale of Dxd is vast compared to the original series featuring Harry.

The Sacred Gears which play a huge role put anything in the world of Harry Potter to shame there is nothing to rival it since the creator has no equal being the Biblical God.

The Gears were created to inspire faith, and miracles to his believers but also to level the playing field of Humanity against Devils, Angels or Fallen Angels.
Jose19 chapter 4 . 1/24/2019
The Killing curse by the way won’t kill powerful Devils of Maou class or higher you didn’t read Dxd carefully because Devils have a very high resistance to Dark Magic or the Element of Darkness.

The Killing curse does great damage to Angels, and Fallen Angels but it would not bother a Maou level Devil or the Four Maous.
Jose19 chapter 3 . 1/24/2019
I can give great help when it comes to Dxd because I have been a member of their wikia for a long while.

The Sitri is a powerful Clan like the Gremory, and their Clan specialty is a High Water affinity but Harry is a ant compared to Serafall since she can destroy Japan over a thousand times over.

The power scale of Dxd is off the charts anyone here can beat of their characters without breaking a sweat.

The Sacred Gears are a major changer nothing in Potter’s world comes close in power since the Biblical God created to inspire faith in his followers by creating miracles but also are designed to level the playing field against the Devils, and the other Supernatural Factions.

The magic is more potent than the paltry magic shown in the Potter series including the weapons as well since all the weapons of legend exist.
irishman97 chapter 2 . 12/22/2018
chaos that what will happen if Deadpool and Luna teamed up
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