“Now, now, I find your lack of formality disturbing”? Bwahahahahaha! Golden! Absolutely golden! All in all, I liked this chapter.
#IFindYourLackOfFaithDisturbing

well shit. this is gonna be gooooood.

It was a nice story in it's own, twisted way.
Liked all those Star Wars references and quotes.

So the good old "Clone trooper armor" vs "Stormtrooper armor". That will be nice.

So knew it you wouldn't pass a "I am your father." sceene.

And now it's time for the loud and long "NOOOOOOO" from Pyrrha.

Once again, one of Ozpin's stupid games backfired.

And of couse Ozpin faints before informing them that the Jaune they knew had been tramsformed to Datrh Vader.

Oh, so the recording Blake showed them was an older one where Jaune was... well, still Jaune and not Vader.

"Think of the Whiterun Tavern in Skyrim"

Man first you kill my man Richard Simmons then you bring in "arrow in the knee" what is your latin name so i may worship you?

Is it okay if i post that quote on my profile?

Bravo on this story, I believe with all what I think are sly references to other franchises (cough,cough mainly rvb) and pretty much leaving off on a note that (Kylo) Ren takes Jaune's helmet to 'honor' him though he wanted it all to be burnt. You my friend have earned a place in my favorites

Great story JC c wish someone can do a fic where Jaune becomes The Joker in a freak accident

I read this story and I thought of two possible outtakes that randomly came to mind from TFS Dragon Ball Abridged abd from HISHE Star wars enjoy

First encounter with Pyrrha and Darth Arc before Jaune knew of Pyrrha's semblance

Arc: So, this is where we meet, huntress.

Pyrrha:...Your limbs, they don't move naturally are they even real?

Arc: Yes, you see it, my body has been enhanced by the most advanced of technolog-

Pyrrha: Are those made of metal?

Arc: Wha-
(Pyrrha then quickly uses her semblance destroying Vadar's limbs and shattering his Aura instantly)

Pyrrhalooks at his chest) Is that a breathing device?

Arc: NO I NEED THAT!
(she then crushes his breathing mechanism)
Pyrrha: And what's with your helmet? Show your true face
(She then proceeds to remove his Helmet with her semblance showing the disfigued face of the man she once loved)
Pyrrha:...JAUNE!?

(Star Wars theme begins playing such as when the movie is ending)

Outtake 2 occurring directly after Jaune killed Cinder, helped Pyrrha get maiden power and rememberd who he was

SalemGrabs Jaune by the throat lifting him up) You've foiled my plans, killed my maiden Cinder, and Jeopardized years of planning because of your actions. I will now have my revenge, forthwith

Jaunemuffled) But the story is ending and I just got back with my girlfrien-

Salem: FORTHWITH!
(she then punches him through the lungs making him squeal in pain)

Pyrrha: JAUNE!?

(everything then proceeds as normal)

So those were the two outtakes that occurred in my mind I hope you enjoyed and I'm sorry for any emotional harm I've caused.

Totally awesome,i hope to see you soon on streaming eagle. Good work.

Idea for ren's sword, it should be an expandable blade with heaters in the blade to make it look like a saber, while two exhaust ports on the sides to add those flame things