It was aight, good job

The chat blanc angle...not keen about it. It was an unnecessary distraction and uncomfortable. You seem to pick n choose your life too. Are you implying Th used the miraculous together to erase memories? Then what was the cost? There's always a cost, Th stated. He wouldn't just use them like that. I think you just didn't know how to shoehorn in a sex scene with Chat

Liked the use of pet names, the tension build up prior. But you need to look over what you wrote. Just because it passed spell check doesn't make it correct.

Your story is good, but do you not re-read it before you post? So many incorrect words and odd sentences. They detract from your tale.

Started off good. Was happy I had found a fanfic that wasnt stupidly rushed. But Chapter 2 has sooo many grammar errors. Like you got too excited in your writing and just started quickly throwing things out. Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 feel like there written by two different people. Shame but the idea was good

A bit of advice, you really need to work on how you phrase things. For instance, you described her as being spicy, which I have no idea what that’s supposed to mean. Hot-headed maybe? But it sounds more like someone who’s first language wasn’t English, but still has a pretty good understanding of it anyways.

What I mean is while I understand most everything you’re saying, it still sounds awkward the way you phrase things. You should probably get a beta to try and clean up, not just that grammar, but also the awkwardness.

NOOOOO PLZ MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS MAYBE ABOUT HOW THEY HAVE A FAMILY TOGTHER

You desperately need this proofread. The story is good, but it’s very obvious English is not your first language.

So adorably sweet I can't handle it. Cupcake, macaroon. Thems nicknames are gonna give me a toothache

this is the best Marichat/Adrienett fanfic i have read so far, took me for a ride on the feels train, very good job!

this gave me tingles and butterflies...eeeppp! -extreme squeeling-

-smashes window and kicks chat noir in the head-DONT TOUCH DA CHILD!

Amazin story! Great job, great dialogs, you really caught the personalities of the characters, maybe in a bit darker way.
Although I didn' like that much the chat blank part - it was kind of too much to my taste, hehe not very gentelman like :)
Thanks again for your effort and for great story, I spent great time reading it.

This is honestly of the best fics I’ve ever read, so funny, romantic and it keeps you excited to read. Love it!

I have been waiting for a fanfiction to use Chat Noir's "Who ever she is beneath that mask, I love that girl" It is my favorite line. It also shows that Chat wants to know the girl under the mask. Thank you so much for that my life is complete.

I love Plagg actin counselor for Adrian.