I VOTE FOR YOU!

This was alright. I read IzDaSilverWolf's and I chose her fanfic as the winner.

Both of yours started very similarly but the reason I chose hers was because it was unique and had a good twist.

Even though this was just a one-shot, I still expect one-shots to have some sort of plot, and this was lacking in that aspect, which is why I didn't choose it. Though your descriptions were written quite well, the overall story was very basic.

Cute!

So cuuttee Fangirling so badly right now, no way! Well done

This was so good! I hope this becomes one of the legit endings for your game...

BTW I vote for you!

TBH this was better

I think this time it's your story.