| Reviews for Expelled |
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   Kcototheyoyoyo chapter 11 . 7/26 Beautiful! This story was everything and more! Great job! |
| Blandy8521 chapter 11 . 7/25 Well 2 things: 1: This felt really rushed and I'm not sure why I read it 2. This clearly isn't complete |
| mumphie chapter 11 . 7/24 Oh I hope you have a finished sequel out there since you ended in a cliffie! |
| mumphie chapter 3 . 7/23 Couldn't Harry go to the Goblins with one of the elves, both under glamour, and talk to them? |
| mumphie chapter 2 . 7/23 Just wondering why Harry didn't have Dobby go ASAP to clean out his Trust vault. Or, have Kreature get money from the Black vault. Or why would the Goblins listen to the Minister when the trial was illegal to begin with? |
| stylo1 chapter 2 . 7/20 the confiscating of his vault is bullshit otherwise they wouldve taken those of the death eaters long ago |
| Gina chapter 11 . 7/17 aaaaahhhhh! |
| Gina chapter 2 . 7/17 I'm on the edge of my seat! I'm also very glad there is another chapter |
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/11 Poorly written. I dnk what voice this would be considered but it’s boring. No dialogue whatsoever. Everything sounds like a police report. Heavy on passive voice and no energy at all. I couldn’t read through the boring, dragging prose so skipped through to see how it ends and found that it’s also not completed. Bleah. |
| guest chapter 1 . 6/17 WARNING: FIC IS ***NOT*** COMPLETE - nowhere near! Don't continue if you want a finished tale. |
| Charlee56 chapter 11 . 6/18 Talk about a CLIFFHANGER! One way... You've had yet fun. Time to finish this tale! Get back to work! |
| cliffdweller chapter 11 . 4/6 Why is this story listed as complete? |
| Tom.ward3520 chapter 1 . 2/27 I am so pissed . this is not complete . you sir are a liar |
| alba chapter 11 . 2/16 I am very disappointed. This story was marked completed then to reach the last chapter to find it unfinished. If you don't plan to finish this story it should have been marked abandoned or on hiatus. Please take off completed it is not fair to your readers. |
| mithrilandtj chapter 11 . 1/15 Why is this story listed as complete when it clearly isn't? |
