Reviews for Orphan Devil |
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Guest chapter 14 . 8/25 Wow, so that’s how Naruto won. Instead of sheer strength and skill, he wins with typical Ching Chong humor anus comedy shit. Fuck you asshole, way to kill your own fic. |
Danirodriguez1995 chapter 14 . 8/23 Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched. |
Kraizy chapter 10 . 6/13 Is the grammar getting worse the farther in I read? And the plot is going absolutely nowhere. |
Samuel2072 chapter 11 . 5/3 You know what would be funny is if naruto was like "WHY DOES EVERY HOT WOMEN I MEET WANNA HAVE SEX WITH ME ON THE SPOT" It might be a guys greatest dream, but realistically to me it would propably be a nightmare. like I think the count so far is 14. |
kyuubi ruler of all bijuu chapter 14 . 3/5 Nice |
Guest chapter 14 . 2/6 Pathetic, the plot is stupid and lacks depth. Character development is shit, i mean really now its basically a bashing fic |
Emn93 chapter 14 . 1/31 I found it interesting to see several characters mixed in this fic, so I hope it continues, despite having published a long time ago, I hope you are still interested in this fic. |
Xud10a chapter 1 . 1/17 Wow I think this chapter is pretty much summarized the whole story... it’s fuckin terrible. Seriously, Naruto considering suicide just because a girl turned him down that’s so pathetic. It honestly amazes me how people write these terrible fanfics and wonder why people call them out on it. This is not Naruto cause the Naruto that we all know and love would never think of commuting sucked just because a girl turned him down it’s so stupid |
Isobu chapter 9 . 10/19/2019 Wow, why does everyone have to hate issei? He didn't even say anything about 'because we are girls we can't defeat them?' Like wtf is wrong wit em? |
avjuan37 chapter 14 . 9/1/2019 please make more chapters |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/11/2019 This is so bad its good |
AcidESP chapter 14 . 7/20/2019 Good story, I heard it mainly for a Youtuber, a greeting, this genius, see you, bye! |
Uzukaki chapter 1 . 6/5/2019 I like it |
Monster King chapter 14 . 6/4/2019 Great job please continue the story |
avjuan37 chapter 14 . 4/10/2019 please make more chapters |