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So good. You should write more COD AW fanfic. This one is no slash so far. Just how I like it. Keep going

That was exciting. Really enjoyed it. Sometimes you forget to use a new paragraph for dialogs, though. Very good read nonetheless.

I never got around to reviewing because I have exams going on, but I have a few minutes to spare. I like how Connor seems a lot more open with everyone now, yet what I love more is the tension between showing some vulnerability to Magda and remaining that tough brit (the nightmare and his parting kiss with Magda). I'm looking forward to the missions as well, and the references back to Nico and Soap (fun fact: I've never stayed up so late reading a fanfiction story - Nico/Soap - as I did with yours). Can't wait for the next chapter!

Yes next mission for them!and I'm really satisfied with Connor and Magda moment~

Yay great start so looking forward to the next part :-)

I have waited so long for this! and whilst this has only started, it seems it is going to be worth the wait. Two things I won't get enough of; the witty banter with connor and those around him, and hopefully a lot more magda.