:) Nice !

I like that mari finally snapped. she does tend to self sabotage by herself but chloe and othe factors do usual get in the way and seeing chloe kissing Adrien would make mari snap. mari tends to also be stubborn and impulsive and a little selfish when her emotions take control(usually with Adrien) and even though she isn't dating Adrien, nor has she confessed, it would still upset her. I don't think its entirely his fault since he wasn't dating mari, and that kiss ws forced on him.
I like that she really hurt chat noi pretty badly and just left him and then when sh found him later as Adren she healed him. it shows a double standard she would have when her focus is just on Adrien. I like him being smart enough to come up with a trap to stall her so she would see him as Adrien to see if that would make her stop.
and the best pat was her own reaction. she has him by the throat and she is so horrified at he implications that Adrien being chat has. that it means SHE was the one who horribly hurt Adrien and made those wounds she had fixed up later. added that she probably knows she had let him believe ladybug wouldn't be there to help she let her partner despair having to work alone.
and she knows Adrien already is a lonely guy.(not to mention she been low key brushing his flirting as chat so easily which is embarrassing because he's her crush but also does a good job of tipping the scales so she doesn't blame everyone else for her lack of hanging out time with Adrien).
so her sweet horrified reaction of being the one to hurt him and putting him in this situation when she just wanted to be with him is really compelling.
I am glad he hugged her though he is definitely going to have some words with her horrifying method of purifying herself! though his lady/princess is all or nothing. he cn joke she couldn't deal with just a regular akuma, she had to get the mother load! while crying. since she is purified does this mean she's forget everything she did? is everyone going to be okay?

Wow... that was amazing!

oh my godddd

CONTINUE IT!

;o; CHUU! BOICHE! KISS! WAAH! LADYBUG! ADRIANE! SO MANY HUGS! XS

Hawkmoth is actually adrians dad

Uh oh! :(

Honestly, I can't really get into this story because of the way it was presented. Instead of using dashes to signal dialogue it would be better looking and more professional to use quotation marks (Example: Instead of -Its not that bad, do it as "It's not that bad," Alya told her best friend.). Plus the next line shown an error when saying "Alya was talking Marinette in the bathroom" The sentence structure needed work. Your spelling needs work too. People won't be encouraged to read a story if it has this many errors and mistakes as soon as it starts. It ruins immersion and takes away from the experience.