| Reviews for Naruto the Yellow Death |
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  Isobu chapter 1 . 2/8 Sage of six paths: *Casually kills all of Naruto friends and completely wipes his dimension* "There's still hope!" Me: no way Naruto forgives him Naruto: *reluctant Understanding* Me: Having good intentions doesn't excuse wiping out all of Naruto's friends AND then you decide to reset all of the progress he made and getting everyone to acknowledge him I'm talking about the six paths not the author the author is fine |
 kogentasprimo chapter 3 . 1/12 not sure if your still working on this but there are a few places with wrong references to naruto and haku, one where you call naruto as naruko and another where you switch between he/she for haku a bit disconcerting when trying to read as it can trip you up but manageable, thought you might like to know. |
| O.O chapter 7 . 1/4 Wow... That... Happened... Well, good job. Excited for part 8. |
| Jordisk chapter 3 . 7/11/2019 One issue I have seen so far. In the ANBU report, they constantly switched between male and female pronouns. Mostly female towards the beginning, and ending on male, but still swapping in the middle. |
| MythAvenger chapter 3 . 2/14/2019 In page 3 you kinda need to make sure of Naruto or naruko |
| A10riddick chapter 7 . 10/27/2018 Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Can't wait to see how Fem Garra and Naruto get together! Why does he also not get together with Fu because it seems like she like him? Small harem? |
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/12/2018 That was short but plz updates and show more NaruFu |
| Abhichatlevi chapter 7 . 4/29/2018 Plzz update! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/19/2018 Please continue I'm loving this so far |
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/19/2017 Just thought that you should know that you make mistakes on characters gender mid story or change on a dime in a sentence just something to look out for. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/1/2017 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY! |
| 0Shard0 chapter 3 . 6/14/2017 There's a lot of she's and hers even though you warned about it and sometimes there is still Naruko instead of Naruto in it but a good amount of it you changed it to refer him as he is instead of having him a girl. I'd continue to say more but I'm starting to confuse myself now with all the he and she biz. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/13/2017 Is this the end of the story? |
| insaneOdin chapter 7 . 5/1/2017 Will you continue this? |
| Hadrian Eveningshade chapter 3 . 2/7/2017 In this story, naruto or naruko ,? |
