Reviews for Triangles
Bow Echo chapter 1 . 11/23/2018
Just wish there was more, so much more. In a good way obs. There is just not enough fodder on the filters to keep this shipper happy. Beautifully written as always.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2017
So good! Thank you for writing this!
stevenat chapter 1 . 6/3/2016
THAT WAS SO GOOD
candi711 chapter 1 . 5/12/2016
This was cute. I really felt for Amanda in this episode, even if she did act rash and wrongly. I wish they would have a scene like this in the real show. Great job.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
Love this! Please write some more Rolisi. Thanks!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
That was awesome! Fanfic writers are so much better than the real svu writers.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
Wow this was perfect. I think you captured their personalities in the best ways possible. I think Liv is harder on Rollins than the rest but she definitely got what she deserved this episode, and I love how you made Carisi know exactly what to say to get through to her there. Great job keep it up, I can't wait to read more of your Rolisi fics.
Bm89 chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
This was really good! I think you captured the two of them perfectly. Great job!
Of Jumbled Thoughts chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
Fantastic characterization. I loved how you showed how Amanda doesn't like to let her walls down; how she was hesitant to show emotion but also how she was willing to open up to Sonny. I love how Sonny thought about following her, because he considers people's emotions, and then did it. I love how you addressed how Amanda feels about how everyone else is treating her since she's become a mother and how Sonny feels when he realizes he has been part of that. I love that they're honest with each other and recognize their mistakes. This scene feels so canonical, and is beautifully crafted-every word, every sentence, is an absolute gem. I can't wait to read your next Rollisi fic. Five stars, well done.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
This was amazing! The "you're makin' me soft/you're makin' me strong" thing killed me :D That's a beautiful way to describe their dynamic, I really do feel like they balance each other out. And I agree about your analysis of Amanda's behavior; how she feels like everyone thinks she will be a different person now that she's a mom, but she doesn't feel different and just wants to prove she can do the job. I wish we got to see more Amanda/Carisi in the show, because I would imagine it something like this.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
That was a well written story, very realistic! I think you respected both Amanda and Carisi and it's really something I imagine could have happened. I also like the way Carisi tries to be there for Amanda but doesn't try to dominate her.
You did really good!