Reviews for The Mystic Springs Oasis lead
Jonad chapter 1 . 10/22/2018
Amazing but how horny thy hear the moans
Zootanic chapter 1 . 10/10/2018
I enjoyed it. It was so well-written! Although, I have a suggestion... maybe remove the dashes and replace them with quotation marks?
patrickharris98 chapter 1 . 5/17/2017
you should make a sequel to this
Soildier chapter 1 . 2/3/2017
This was a really interesting concept. It would've been nice to see how write them going throughout the whole case together, after this scene.
komodor chapter 1 . 10/14/2016
Well sure I did, It is well written story put into a part of the movie with a plot and kinda detailed smut part. Just the cover picture could be hotter, this one is kinda neutral. Also the spacing between the lines could be a bit more shorter, since its getting a little harder to read. and the dialogue could be separetad completely, so everyone understands who is talking. but from the content point of view I have nothing to criticize. Well made story. Also I believe there could be more situations for another chapter.
RainStorm2122 chapter 1 . 10/8/2016
I'm glad I'm not the only pervert like my husband jests that I am. XD
herro2u2 chapter 1 . 7/15/2016
you should make one for after the case
sunnieKat chapter 1 . 7/10/2016
This was a nice Au of the nudist club a very very nice one .3.
Master Fearless Shadow chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
I LOVE IT!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
I hove to say that this is, with out question, a great story.

Btw, are you sure that this is your first story writing in English?

Also, I shouldn't have read this story while I was waiting to do a live online lesson. It was bad, expecially trying not to think about the story while doing the lesson. *Insert Crying of Laughter emoji here* *Insert Blushing emoji here* *Insert Soul Escaping my Body emoji here*
Natasel chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
You know, this just might be enough to get some very interesting changes to the story.

Given that Nick and Judy had a literal and figurative bonding moment (and foxes mate for life IRL), its highly probable that Nick may actually be moved to sincerely cooperate with Judy.

And everyone else seems to be asking for more so I'll join in: MOAR!

Even just a revised ending would be gold.
The dark guardian chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
Best zootopia story ever hope to get more thanks
jonale.fm chapter 1 . 3/13/2016
Oh good grief...This fic can make it as a comic with animation, so please make it so
Long Jhon Walker chapter 1 . 3/10/2016
There's no epilogue, at the end of the story the movie would resume. It would cause some funny modifications that I leave to each one's imagination :)

Thank you all for your positive feedback! More than two thousands visitors, I hope you've enjoyed it!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2016
I enjoyed *heart eyes emoji* But is there like a epilogue or something? *bashful emoji*
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