Reviews for Salem may cry
Guest chapter 4 . 9/8
Continue it's going good
Midnight49 chapter 7 . 8/21/2017
Need more chapters please I really want to what Dante, Vergil, Trish and Nero will do next.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/13/2017
The big dickle (misspell intended) has written the longest review I've ever seen. Get a life pickle
The big pickle chapter 7 . 5/25/2017
But at least this isn't as bad as you other stories
The big pickle chapter 7 . 5/25/2017
After reading this i have a bunch of complaints: why do OCS have to be here? They are unlikable as fuck! Second: nero's oocness why did he kiss Weiss's hand for no real reason? Earlier you said he was engaged to kyrie and yet Weiss is the last person he'd date if he wasn't ooc third: Vergil's submit to Adam and if Vergil was characteristic he wouldn't have provoked the white fang and go along with them for a bit until he finds the best time to stab them in the back and why didn't he kill them when they threatened him? He would do that in reality! Third: lack of introduction pace because you couldn't think this of a better way of meeting the others in a creative way you directly have them trust each other with the closest to being characteristic that isn't Dante is Weiss and Blake was uncharacteristically trusting and open to Dante she is mostly the silent type and Nero being teleported after getting engaged to kyrie? WHY?! Hell you've even forgot to fully explain why he even got there and you didn't explain Trish's appearance at all! And you also never explained the appearance of the crappy ocs! fourth: the OCS when you put them there they each felt one dimensional with no purpose at all you made them each unlikable with the only entertain thing about them is one of them snapping at Dante. Fifth: the pacing, you made this story go into a plot way too fast ( I actually don't blame you for this because many authors make the same mistake by having their character meet the cast at unrealistically circumstances most often happens at the initiation) and where is Glynda? Then there is just confusion like jumping into the shitty OCS who were not introduced at all even in there debut. ( yes I hate them) finally the biggest problem is the oocness of everyone except Dante( which you were spot on with the only thing missing is that he sweet talks to Trish) because everyone was uncharacteristically open (except ruby) it just makes me think I'm reading a crappy naruto fic that clouds fan fiction. If everyone is that open than I wouldnt be surpiresd if they accept someone like Dr doom there. And then there is just laziness in writing because the chapters are very short and not very thought out at all. So if you continue this story I suggest you rewrite it and remove the fucking ocs, and learn to better pace the story and make actual sense of why Dante,Vergil,Nero, and Trish's arrived on remnant.
Guest chapter 7 . 5/25/2017
Why am I glad that the OCS got delayed screentime?
Gizmo Gear chapter 3 . 4/29/2017
Huh, and reunions begin!
Gizmo Gear chapter 2 . 4/29/2017
Hmmm...I looked at a DMC video before...I think I oughta watch the whole series to understand whats going on, huh?

BUT! Thats never stopped me before!
Gizmo Gear chapter 1 . 4/29/2017
A lil short, dontcha think?
TheShadowHeart chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
Vergil would have killed Adam on spot for threatening him.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/1/2016
this stories humor is so good can't wait to see what happens next
Guest chapter 6 . 10/30/2016
You didn't tell us what the rap was called.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/30/2016
I translated most of the names but what does Ni~Tsu mean?
YeTianshi chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
This might sound like a complaint, I don't mean it as such, maybe a little? I'm just trying to point some things out, tell me if I'm being rude.

1-) Since when does Virgil give in to threats? I wouldn't be surprised if he had decapitated the poor Faunus on principle!
2-) Sparda isn't their surname... pretty sure they don't have one. Some call them that, but they themselves don't really acknowledge it as their family name.
3-) I got no complaints about Dante though, so far so good :D
Sorat2341 chapter 6 . 10/8/2016
Welp, I guess this story is deader than Pyrrha now (killmeplsforthatpoorstolenjokesomebody)
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