First, this is so well written. Just beautifully written. Secondly, this makes me want to cry, I love these two characters so much.

love the humanizing aspect of it. fantastic

Yes! This is so awesome; my feels for this OTP are at an all time best. Thank you for posting this! The writing was beautiful and the scenes were all very nicely put together.

"The problem with hurricanes is that they destroy (even when they try not to)." Still my favorite line. Read this back in AO3, it's nice to see it here.

:D very enjoyable

*sigh* ohhhh gorgeous! So true to the characters and so full of feels! Well done. I love the title too, it's incredibly poetic and descriptive. Great read!