it's a good story please update

Please update, and can you make a Natsu/Chelia story? I know their pairing is not that popular and there's not much of story about them but for me they have chemistry and they are an interesting pair.

Hopefully you find the motivation to keep writing this cause I want to see it the whole way through, thank you for the update. Great as usual!

I totally agree with you on your AN. Lucy as a character is just too normal compared to the others. There's so many NaLu AU stories on fanfiction that people just accepted the trend, but for me, other pairings or just pure adventure fanfics are what I care about. So many fleshed out good characters and yet Natsu chooses Lucy...
Otherwise, your story is pretty damn good, and well narrated. I like the concept that there's not a lot of hate going around, despite Natsu's choices. :D Keep up the good work!

Damn. This chapter got me depressed as fuck. First, the tone of this whole chapter was bleak and gloomy. Then, the ending was heart wrenching. And now there isn't that much inspiration to continue the story often enough (;~;)... Shit.

But oh well, it was a fantastic read while it lasted! I'll be here day one for each update, even if they take months for them to come out individually. But it's like they say, quality over quantity :).

And oh yeah. FUCK LUCY! I BLAME ALL OF THIS SHIT ON HER! GOT ME OUT HERE HATIN ON NALU! FUCK THE OTP!
K, dats it :p. Take care Zoy :).

Ooooooohh man. You're a real piece of work, you know that Zoy? That scene with Lucy and Yukino got me fucked up, and it's way too late to be feeling this way... Fuck! This is so good! And I'm almost caught up (;~;)...

God damn, that dream was a roller-coaster of emotions... That said, the fight was excellent! The way you wrote it made it have some weight into the battle :). Usually fics don't really describe their fights that well and end up being pretty simple and kinda boring and repetitive. But the hand-to-hand combat in this chapter was very descriptive and the way you made their reactions to taking the hits made the fight so damn invigorating! The only other fairy tail fic that has been able to do that is "Of Inner Demons", my favorite FT fic. So this chapter alone gave me a great guess on how this story will flow when it comes to the choreography :). Again, fantastic job!

FUCKING HELL! THIS CHAPTER WAS SO DAMN BEAUTIFUL (;~;)! I knew that I would eventually stumble into a literature goldmine after 100 pages of searching :D!

I am contacting the authorities. How dare you force this overload of sweetness onto me! I'll probably die of a diabetic heart attack at this rate you fiend!

nice job uwu

100% agree about Lucy, never been a fan of NaLu myself but even in the earlier parts of the show where you praised her she never really caught my interest the same way Erza/Gray or even Laxus did

Cool seeing this updated and with a strong dose of drama.

Please update this, it's been over a year and this wait is killing me.

Can't wait for the next chapter in this story

Fuck you man this hurts alot

I actually really love the analyses you do. I agree with a lot of the points you make. Especially the part about limits. It's gotten to the point where the fights are boring because the characters are just so OP or just gain extra power through friendship. I thought Lucy was gonna smack Natsu when she found out he fought Yukino. I can imagine Yukino hitting Lucy back in that situation to defend Natsu and show that she's strong enough to stand up for people she cares about and stop letting people call her weak. Also just to put Lucy in her place. Keep up the great work!