| Reviews for The Determined One |
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  Guests chapter 1 . 6/13 I can’t wait till you update this story it’s very good and please don’t delete the story it’s so wonderful have a wonderful day |
 Legalt chapter 4 . 3/11 Yup, what's new? Another author who can't make decisions for himself regarding pairings. Dunno why most of the harem author's on this site are partially brain dead. Like seriously, unless you're doing pure smut, more than 5 members are unmanageable. Like seriously, just decide on who you want. But no, if the indecisiveness isn't enough, they ask for recommendations on more members. I mean wut? Might as well just add every damn female, then... Which is basically what happens. And what happens because of the poor decision making and planning which leads to everything seriously becoming unmanageable as I said? Novel gets dropped. Every. Single. One. Without fail. Every author who asks for recommendations to the harem will drop their novel. You can't write with no outline in mind. Pulling what you did is just a fast track to lost motivation and writers block. Wish people could stop being so stupid and decide their damn pairings beforehand. If you can't, set a damn limit and only accept a few. GG |
| look2019 chapter 13 . 10/27/2019 Good Chapter! |
| jackyfloresq2001 chapter 13 . 7/1/2019 Can't wait for the next chapter in this story |
| Pons chapter 13 . 11/20/2018 Bullshite about people having naruto eyes and power I thought the Only the Mc was special not some ficking random stranger |
| Etherious.Nat5u.Dragneel chapter 13 . 11/5/2018 Pls make more |
| Mr.unknow chapter 4 . 10/24/2018 okay new to this story and i came to this chapter and saw the old update and wanted to ask... where is juvia's name? isn't she still apart of the harem still? |
| bestwritereverlolz chapter 13 . 9/17/2018 It’s been so long, I miss you |
| rufus264 chapter 13 . 9/15/2018 Great chapter |
| Lance chapter 2 . 8/15/2018 Please update I love this story keep up the great work |
| rufus264 chapter 12 . 8/12/2018 Great chapter |
| Angryhenry chapter 12 . 8/11/2018 Hmm |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2018 I'll be honest with you y actually really wanted to read this story and I tried but I just can't anymore the story is just full of bad grammer and a lot of plot holes like I have almost never seen. I honestly think that if you review all your chapters and fixe the gramer, and the story line/plot it could be a great story. Ex. In one chapter 5 your telling me that natsu was training at the edge of the forest of magnolia and no body heard him drestroying hundreads of trees and the explocion of his attacks and the he casually walks five feet into magnolia and finds gajeel attaking Levy it just was to convinient besides that would make it at least what 9 pm. It could be a good story but you just need fix things that are way to convinient. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 11/9/2017 UPDATE U BASTARD |
| Dragonfire987 chapter 11 . 8/14/2017 this is awesome i hope you would continue it |
