This is a rather odd, and yet very fun beginning for this series. Will it all be from a Companion's point of view?

Teva: She's a bit immature, a bit gabby and bouncy, but clearly a dear little thing. Will love to about him and her new "Chosen" as this progresses...

You have a gift for plain simple speaking about simple events... That should do you well indeed.

Well done. I am obviously not a writer but I do enjoy a good story and like the Companion POV.

Thank you for a most delightful read - I will never be able to hear the word "bouncy" again without cracking a grin.

I CAN'T COUNT ALL OF THE WORDS I'M GOING TO SAY SO I'LL JUST TELL YOU WHAT I THINK. You are Mercedes Lackey, but BETTER! (I seem to capitalize words quite a lot, don't I?) I absolutely LOVE, LOVE, LOVE Teva! Best. Fanfiction. Ever. In the world. I would nominate this to be a literal BOOK, it's so good! Send this link to Mercedes Lackey NOW, A.S.A.P., Do not collect $100. SEND IT! You're so carefree, even when there it's dangerous, it's almost as if all Teva cares about is sarcasm, irony, wit, embarrassment, laughter, and innocence. (Read: Evilness) The way she seems to talk to you telling you to stop laughing and get ON with it, is strangely threatening and cute at once. I LOVE THIS BOOK!

Teva's pov is definitely one of the more interesting I've ever read. She's a good one for a laugh.

hi, i love how well rounded your characters are. Teva is a right character, as well. Keep writing, i love this bunch of characters, and your writing style. (the Grass is Greener shorts are freaking hilarious, love the evendim one)

This fic had me in fits of laughter. Being a magic mushroom user I just loved Teva. Now looking for mor of your Teva fics

Tera,

I enjoyed your new use of an old saying in the line "paint the Palace red".

Auua

This as well as the oneshots that I have read from these two characters are simply stunning. Teva has quickly become a favorite character of mine. Thank you for writing this masterpiece and posting it for all of us to enjoy!

This is a lot of fun, and I very much enjoyed it. Thanks for writing.

good story it was funny

This is the first of your fanfic I have read, Work the story for the Companion point of view work very well, as did have a story about the day to day life a working Herald.

I think your story would work better if you had mix the view points of the events that took place tell them from both Herald and His companion view point this would strength the over all story arc.

I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you for a very different type of Valdemar story, most enjoyable.

my one vice are books, I own over 2500 sf fantasy horror ect, over the years, I have found the best story are those which almost cast a spell on you, from the page onwards your story has cast such a spell and I look forward to reading your story and will try to full review after reading

I REALLY enjoyed this story! I am also going to look into your other stories. I hope that they are as good as this one! Keep up the good work!

I love how Teva goes from "down-home country girl" to "English Nave" and I quote "Oh Bugger..."