Reviews for Eclipse
JuicyFruits123 chapter 14 . 7/23
I like this. It's pretty cool, would like to see more of percy and zoe adventuring around
Vosck chapter 14 . 7/11
This story is a masterpiece
kyuubi7 chapter 14 . 6/17
I can't wait to read more of this and to see Perseus become a full god.
Guest chapter 14 . 6/16
The fact that the last thing he wanted to see were Zoe’s eyes
McL1008 chapter 14 . 6/6
Love it
PsychoStorys chapter 2 . 5/27
this I really well written. kudos.
Halariel chapter 14 . 5/25
Well, I always liked the direction of the story actually. The setting in the ancient world is truly unique in its own right already, and the fact that you explore the time when the heart of the west shifted is even more so. I have absolutely no idea as to what will happen in the future. I have my theories of course, but as to what will actually happen I truly dont know. And thats exactly what I love about reading! Having no idea of the future, waiting with baited breath to see the adventures of our heroes continue, that shit gets me going!
I really like the dynamic between Zoe and Perseus, too. Its not rushed or forced and their struggles feel very much real. I cant wait for what the next chapter will bring us :D
Strife4life chapter 14 . 5/24
Zoe taught that bitch some manners
Halariel chapter 13 . 5/24
Nooooo, Pholus! Nonetheless nice to see this gem updated! Can't wait for the next chapter and the direction that youll take this story into!
SorrowfulDeity chapter 13 . 5/20
So glad to see an update on this story :)
DovahkiinGod chapter 13 . 5/20
I'm so glad this is being updated. Honestly, the story is wonderfully well played out. The relationship building is handle masterfully and I can't wait to see more as it continues.
Darth0s chapter 3 . 5/20
He also didn't exist, to be fair, chief.
ThunderSphinx chapter 3 . 5/20
Heracles did his labors long before the Heart of the West moved from Greece to Rome. Heracles existed around the time of Jason and the original Perseus, about 3 thousand years before PJO takes place. So Zoe should be dead by now since she lost her immortality several centuries previously.
StickyFingaz chapter 12 . 4/30
This was amazing can't wait for the next chapter!
bable631 chapter 12 . 4/29
Idk what the update was 12ish hours ago but it seems to have screwed up your formatting on several chapters.
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