Reviews for Mastering the Basics
Borello chapter 5 . 10/2/2019
the story is great and i hoped to read more chapter.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/21/2019
you're a retard. mastering the basics is all well and good, but Naruto couldn't even graduate without A clone jutsu, ANY clone jutsu. And no matter how much he masters the other basics, Naruto could NEVER manage the normal clone jutsu taught in the academy.
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 8/20/2018
that was good keep the chapters coming
RenegadeSon chapter 5 . 4/3/2018
The dreaded last chapter so far. I hope you come back to this tale. I'm interested to see what happens to this Naruto.
I'm sure it would be coming, but more development for Sasuke and Sakura would be nice. They are extremely shallow characters right now that do not add much to the tale. I get that you set them up for bashing but they are very simplistic.
Kakashi being tricked is unrealistic even with the new Naruto. I do like the change to the story though. It's good and I want to see it continue.
RenegadeSon chapter 4 . 4/3/2018
The reasoning for why Naruto will not learn more advanced jutsus is a great story element. That connection to Mikoto is an integral part of the story. Good writing.
Small scenes with other characters are good. The one you did with Kurenai, Anko and Yugao was good. It would be great to see that with other characters.
The changes to the story are refreshing. Along that line though, it feels like the characters are a bit out of character (although it sort of matches the story). Tsunade is the most unbelievable though because she has quite the harsh exterior (it may have melted to fast here).
As always, good job.
RenegadeSon chapter 3 . 4/3/2018
I really appreciate this story. Please continue and develop this story further. I'm sitting here with hope that you continue. I like what you are doing with Naruto's skills and the unique relationships with Shino and Shikamaru.
The name of the Wakazashi was believable and intriguing. Also I like the pace. It seemed a little quick at first but I see what you were building to. I do think that Naruto's emotional strength was repaired a bit too fast but it was not a big issue.
Anyway! Keep it up.
RenegadeSon chapter 1 . 4/1/2018
Wow. I really like this! This character development for Mikoto is nice.
DeltaWing13 chapter 1 . 3/28/2018
moar
Legendary Legend Layer chapter 5 . 10/24/2017
Mooooooore please continue with this womderful story
buji chapter 3 . 10/26/2016
this is going to be a great story
TampaBayMike95 chapter 4 . 10/24/2016
plz update
TampaBayMike95 chapter 5 . 10/16/2016
plz cont.
TampaBayMike95 chapter 5 . 8/18/2016
I hope you cont. and how about tenten, fū and kin
Sageofchaos chapter 5 . 7/10/2016
hope to read more.
Turb0nat318 chapter 5 . 7/3/2016
Awesome story this is probably my favourite "smart" naruto variant yet! Can't wait to see where this goes
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