Well now I’m sad. This is one of my new fave clone wars fics. I love the POV of obi-wan and all the characters were perfectly written. The anakin and ahsoka moments were all adorable and perfect and made me grin like an idiot at my phone. I truly think that we saw anakin at his best when he was in the role of mentor and teacher to ahsoka, and that was beautifully shown in this fic. Well done.

This was so good!

I love this. It shows amazing relationships. I honestly don't know what to say I just love it

WOW you really know how to write. This story was so beautiful. My emotions are everywhere! You were able to capture each character’s traits and thoughts so well. Thank you so much for this. I’m really looking forward to reading more of your work!

A lovely and insightful look at the relationships among these three. I particularly liked the choice to narrate it through Obi-Wan's eyes.

Huh, I never thought about it like that. Anakin and Ahsoka totally would've created chaos wherever they went and I can also picture them trying to get joint missions just so they can have more dumb competitions.

Why couldn't Star Wars have had Anakin never turning into Darth Vader and have Ahsoka as an actual main character? That would've been so much cooler ;-;

It would be cool to see story of where Ahsoka becomes a jedi knight and later becomes a master. There are few if any stories like that around. Also it would be cool to include the mortis theory where Ahsoka is bound to the daughter.

CAUGHT UP IN MY DANG FEELS
Well done. Good story!

You're such a good author, I love everything of yours that I've read. This was no exception! Beautifully done!

This just breaks my heart, man. I don't even know what to say. Everything about this is perfect. I could see this being an actual episode because of how you've nailed the dialogue and relationships. Everything's so in character and that's what makes it even more painful because I can see all of this unfolding just as you've written it. And it's written so well, like how have you done this?! Ahsoka and Anakin's relationship is so important to me and you've given me everything I could've hoped to read. It was emotionally devastating, of course, but what part of Star Wars isn't? :P Thanks for the read!

Beautiful work. You showcased Anakin and Ahsoka's relationship in such a tender way, and seeing it through Obi-Wan's eyes only made it more significant.

Beautiful. Everything was perfect. Thank you. Best Star Wars: the clone wars one shot I've ever read with Anakin, Ahsoka and Obi-Wan. It's well thought-out and simply amazing. It flowed well and I like your writing style.

Words can't describe my enjoyment of this piece. You captured all of the characters so beautifully
And for a franchise like Star Wars, characters are the most important thing. That's why I love it, and that's why I keep coming back and reading this piece . Insight into the characters I love before it all went wrong. I tip my hat to you.

~Wolfie

This was absolutely beautiful. I love Obi-Wan's insight into Anakin and Ahsoka's relationship and how the first and last scene paralleled each other. You stayed very true to the established relationship between Anakin and Ahsoka while also elaborating on it and giving it more depth. Many kudos to you :)

This is a great idea and well
Executed