Excellent work! This was fantastic! Very emotional too. Love how Elise glomped Lilith. She IS indeed adorable after all in that form! And it’s great that Corrin’s Nohrian Family still accepts him despite being half-dragon of all things! But still...will Corrin eventually learn the truth of his origins? And if so, will he be able to ever conquer the raging dragon within?

Update again soon!

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Great chapter! Loved the emotional feel you gave it. Good work. Please continue to do well on this! I cannot wait until the next chapter!

Something to keep in mind if you do decide to write a heram story is that camilla's background of being raise in a harem has mentally damage her so i do not think she word work in a harem story

There you are, glad you updated and man was this an excellent chapter.

I 100% agree, Corrin turning into a Dragon shouldve been huge, but everyone treated it like it was a common thing, thanks so much for addressing it. I think you should have a scene were Corrin snaps at Iago and turns into a Dragon to threaten him, like he suggests punishing Elise for assisting him with the Ice Tribe Rebellion but this time Corrin decides its time to reveal his new form, scaring Iago real good.

So, i have a question. The pairing in this story could go either Camilla or Hinoka, im all for either of them as you dont see either girl that mutch, but have you considered having them share Corrin? Why make them fight when they can both marry Corrin, keep him in both families and bring the Nohrian and Hoshidan family together? Just something to consider.

Keep up the excellent work.

Fantastic! I enjoyed this read! Especially since it was nice and lengthy. I hope though that Corrin and Camilla will eventually reconcile though. It's never good to see siblings fight (even if it's not with fists).

You also did well portaging everything else too. From Garon, to the Nohrian Royals. I also liked the deja vu you gave Corrin when he saw the Anankos Statue. Very interesting.

Please keep up the good work and update again soon!

P.S. Also, will it be possible that Garon will play a higher role in all of this instead of how he was in Game Canon?

Awesome! Loved this. So Corrin chooses Conquest, but later it will go to Revelations? Fascinating! Loved the fight between the two sisters as well. You did a most excellent job.

Keep this up. I look forward to the next update!

A dramatic Corrin? Psh! Drama is what we need every now and then my friend! Lol.

Anyway, good work! I like this so far. Especially with how you had Camilla comfort Corrin.

I say she should be paired with him in this fic.

The fight was great keep up the great work and please pair camilla with corrin

Please keep going ang pair camilla with corrin please please please

Wow, I forgot this even existed, thanks for continuing.

So Corrin chose Nohr, well, I think I see where your going with this, Corrin sides with Nohr in a attempt to try to stop the war from his side but then eventually joins his siblings from Hoshido (with hopefully his Nohrian allies as well) to form a rebellion which will eventually lead to Garon's defeat and the Revelations arc, which in this story, could be easily done.

Seeing as you are doing Conquest first I think I need to bring up a plot hole that kinda ruins the whole "change kingdom from the inside" thing the game was trying to go for, which a lot of writers of Conquest seem to be trying to do better than what the game could do.

I brought this up to another writer who is doing AU of Conquest, I asked the question, why couldn't Azura show the truth to Corrin when his siblings where around? Think about it, the orb that showed the truth has no limitations, so why didn't Azura wait a little bit longer in order to show Corrin and his Nohrian family the truth? That was the reason why he Conquered Hoshido, to get Garon on the throne and reveal his true form, but what if Xander and the others saw Garon's true form the same time Corrin did? What if Xander now knows that conquering Hoshido is not the right path to peace.

I have an idea, if I may. Why not have Corrin send a message to Ryoma and his Hoshidan siblings that Corrin requests an urgent meeting. Corrin meets up with them at the field where the descision takes place, Hinoka runs up to Corrin and cries on his shoulder saying how much she missed him before she retreats back to Ryoma's side.

Ryoma demands to know why he called them out here. Corrin explains his discovery, which to say they have a hard time believing. Corrin says he went with Nohr to change it, not further the war, he now knows that he must join Hoshido in order to stop the war, so long as the demon holds the throne then nobody is safe.

At first Ryoma doesn't believe him and intends to lock Corrin up for betrayal, but he then notices that a small army, baring the Nohrian and Hoshidan flag, are coming towards them, it's Xander, the rest of the siblings and the Nohrian allies. Corrin is nearly sent to tears, his Nohrian family didn't come with him because they didn't know what to do about the situation, but now they are here, ready to change Nohr.

Xander gets off his horse and apologies to the royal family of Hoshido for all the aggression Nohr has given them, he asks Ryoma if he will help him reclaim his Kingdom, to help vanquish a demon that instigated this whole war and to help save his people. Ryoma agrees and shakes Xander's hand, the rebellion has been formed and the Nohrian allies have joined the Hoshidan army, with Corrin saying that having both his families fighting together is more than he could possibly ask for. Even Corrin properly introduces them to each other and hopes that they all can get along as one big family.

So there you go, it starts off as Conquest with Corrin trying to change Nohr from the inside, eventually it leads to Birthright with the Nohrian allies fighting for the Hoshidan army and then, with the defeat of Garon, leads to Revelations where Azura reveals that the battle isn't over yet, that there is one more enemy to defeat.

Whew, another long review for another good story. One question though, are you taking suggestions for pairings? I wouldn't mind seeing Corrin end up with Camilla or Hinoka (which would permanently tie both families together, then again, both families adopted Corrin, so wouldn't they already be one big family?) as those 2 girls so far come off as the most plausible pairs for this story, but if your looking for suggestions I can give you some if you want.

Thank you for updating, thank you for reading and keep up the good work. Oh, and your fight scenes were pretty good for your first attempt.

This is really good. You should continue if you have the chance.

Really, really cool start! I absolutely can't wait for an update! Though please, if you must, take some time and don't rush it, your health and happiness come first :)

Glad to see another fic about Fire Emblem fates. Love the game and story. Are you going to have any pairings in the fic? I know some people don't like the pairing with Corrin and Azura, but to me they have the best fit of any of the romances. Plus the dialogue and interaction between them is very interesting. I'd hope you'd pair them up if you do any romance, but it's your story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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