This was great! I hope you pick it back up soon!

Snarky Blake and adorkable Yang are the best!

I really enjoy how you've written these two, so much so that I finally created an account to keep track of this (and other fics). But yours really did it! Pushed me over the edge or something something...in a totally good way!

Keep up the good work, buddy. Can't wait (I can, but please not too long?) for your next update.

I like it. I want more like Nora wants pancakes.

Oooh, this looks like it could be fun :D cant wait for more!

I like your snarky intellectual version of Blake and Yang is so adorable, and the dialogue flows so naturally. I'm happy to see you trying something new and light-hearted, I think you'll do an awesome job!

This is a delightful read.

Not many fics tackle the early days of their time at Beacon, well not lately anyway. And you also do it from a Blake centric point of view, which is really cool to see. The banter between her and Yang, and seeing how their partnership started is really fun to read about. I'm excited to see where you go with this, and how you grow their friendship over time.

Your characterizations continue to be on point, you have a deep understanding of these characters and how they interact with one another. It is refreshing to see the relationships within the team explored in such detail.

You are quickly rising up my list of favorite authors. I hope you stick around the RWBY fandom :)

- Moongarm

CONTINUE THIS! LONG LIVE THE BUMBLEBEE!

Interesting... I am curious to see what else you have for this story.