Reviews for Reunion Camp (CANCELLED)
GMWW chapter 6 . 9/24/2016
I love this and cannot wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
GMWW chapter 6 . 9/22/2016
Love this story
JuanLemon chapter 6 . 5/28/2016
Love the story any idea when next chapter is coming out?
Canadians Rock chapter 6 . 5/27/2016
it was awesome
Atomsk the Pirate King chapter 6 . 5/26/2016
There's gonna be a lot of tension between Gumball and Cole. Other than that great job on the chapter
lexboss chapter 6 . 5/25/2016
Great job
Guest chapter 5 . 5/1/2016
Cool! thanks for the feedback! this is one of my favorite storys and the fact that you wrote me back really makes me happy. I will be sure to keep reading the story and keep the status update of me reading the story. also, how often do you update?

your pal-, excaliber excon
lexboss chapter 5 . 5/1/2016
Nice
Platostotle chapter 1 . 5/1/2016
It's called a shuttlecock? I'm sorry, but this takes precedence over anything else. Going to tell the world about this one.

I enjoyed this chapter. I'm sorry I don't have too much to say, but sometimes good can only be described as good.

I know one of those mushy-gushy type couples. They're never self aware of how cringeworthy it is.

Sincerely Alexander almeida.
Atomsk the Pirate King chapter 5 . 4/30/2016
I say it was nice of Gumball to hangout with Leslie. Good job.
Canadians Rock chapter 5 . 4/30/2016
Your story are great
Excaliber Excon chapter 4 . 4/16/2016
wow I love this story! when is gumball, cole, and penny gonna meet?
Atomsk the Pirate King chapter 4 . 4/10/2016
Poor Leslie. Tobias should know better with these jokes. Can't wait for the next one.
lexboss chapter 4 . 4/10/2016
Great job
Platostotle chapter 4 . 4/9/2016
Sorry about the zombie posts. I get really lazy, and also got work to do.
Fortunately for you, I have the luxury of having all the in the world today.
The story is pretty good, but my only issue I really have is that the event don't really stand on their own. They're just stepping stone to get to point A to point B. The whole Leslie is gay incident is a prime example of this. Instead of furthering the development of Leslie, it just serves as a focal point for the group to mock Leslie, Gumball to intervene, and explain to darwin what "gay" is.

Secondly, Tobias isn't a very dynamic character. His entire existence is merely to be the evil, bigoted, antagonist who stands against our noble protagonist. Which is okay for trite, uninspired stories, full of trite, uninspired characters. But Gumball isn't that. He is confused, and developing.
I don't know. Take this with a tiny grain of salt. I probably overanalyzed it a bit too much.

Sincerely Alexander almeida.
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