Reviews for Reunion Camp (CANCELLED) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this and cannot wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story any idea when next chapter is coming out? |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's gonna be a lot of tension between Gumball and Cole. Other than that great job on the chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job |
![]() ![]() Cool! thanks for the feedback! this is one of my favorite storys and the fact that you wrote me back really makes me happy. I will be sure to keep reading the story and keep the status update of me reading the story. also, how often do you update? your pal-, excaliber excon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's called a shuttlecock? I'm sorry, but this takes precedence over anything else. Going to tell the world about this one. I enjoyed this chapter. I'm sorry I don't have too much to say, but sometimes good can only be described as good. I know one of those mushy-gushy type couples. They're never self aware of how cringeworthy it is. Sincerely Alexander almeida. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I say it was nice of Gumball to hangout with Leslie. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story are great |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow I love this story! when is gumball, cole, and penny gonna meet? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Leslie. Tobias should know better with these jokes. Can't wait for the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry about the zombie posts. I get really lazy, and also got work to do. Fortunately for you, I have the luxury of having all the in the world today. The story is pretty good, but my only issue I really have is that the event don't really stand on their own. They're just stepping stone to get to point A to point B. The whole Leslie is gay incident is a prime example of this. Instead of furthering the development of Leslie, it just serves as a focal point for the group to mock Leslie, Gumball to intervene, and explain to darwin what "gay" is. Secondly, Tobias isn't a very dynamic character. His entire existence is merely to be the evil, bigoted, antagonist who stands against our noble protagonist. Which is okay for trite, uninspired stories, full of trite, uninspired characters. But Gumball isn't that. He is confused, and developing. I don't know. Take this with a tiny grain of salt. I probably overanalyzed it a bit too much. Sincerely Alexander almeida. |