I love this story a lot! I've read it a lot of times too - every now and again I get a craving to read this and go dig it up from my bookmarks. Really, a wonderful story that I'm glad I got to read and am grateful that you were inspired to write. Thank you for giving me this joy!

I love this because no other fic catches my interest like this.

I honestly thought I wouldn't like it. I honestly did. It didn't catch my attention when I saw the summary. But after a few weeks of looking through the archives and seeing it, I was like, 'why not, I'm bored.' And all I can say is, I'm happy to have given it a chance.

I really like your story. It's a more of a 'healing' kind of story than the 'action' kind. And it's really awesome how Cloud is still Cloud in his 'cloudy' way. Haha, ok that was bad. Still the way everyone is drawn to him and Aerith is awesome.
Though... Zack's introduction was really the worst way possible. I liked it, but Zack was really unfortunate to meet him the way he did. It's cute how Cloud eventually forgives him.
I really look forward to your next update.

I could never hate such a good writer like you. Your story is way too awesome for that.
I just wanted to remark a little thing. I got kinda confused with the names of Sven and Sten Strife. In a paragraph it's written that Sven and Claudia had been best friends. Wasn't Sten her best friend?
I liked this interlude, since it gave Claudia more in-depth and a better understanding of her character.
Keep going writing such a good story.

So you can upload this but not deaths gambit

Wow. Man have things changed in the slums! Love it!

I continue to love your story!
In the end, cloud and the other will control all the slum:)!

This was a cute chapter. I wonder what Cloud is thinking.

cackles.. nice

your writing is wonderful and you're one of my favorite authors. You give plenty of warning that not even professional writers do- and they go into much more graphic detail. Your characterization takes into account both personality and the circumstances the character has gone through. And your ideas for scenarios are always epic. Not only that but your writing has been constantly improving since you've started posting and this piece completely demonstrates that. I don't generally read for this fandom but your stories are one of the ones I think anyone should make an exception and chance for. Thank you for continuing even though people may make it difficult. Your perseverance too is very admirable. Basically it's a great story. Thank you for sharing it. And apologises that this review isn't more focused on this chapter itself.

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG say what?!i ship this ship and holy cow do I want these two precious babies together! Please say that this is so! That the zack x cloud wagon is a go! Can the girls help zack? Cause cloud is a oblivious cloud of fluff with lots of hurts and trauma.

Thank you so much for this update!

It's not badly writen!
I love how you wrote his bathroom. It gave him so much more character!

( and i would like to say that hate is people being jealous;).

Cute chapter! Zack sure has it bad doesnt he? He should totaly get Aerith and Tiffa to help him get together with Cloud. Or both girls could have picked up on his attraction towards Cloud and deside to help them get together.

I am in love with this story. I don't usually read hurt/comfort/angst/dark/etc. type stories but I enjoy your writing more than my aversion to said genre! You had me crying quite a few times but just like out fave Cetra, I am happy with every step he takes towards healing. Granted it's a story but I just want Cloud to be happy again! Thank you for the lovely stories! I look forward to the next update:D

Awwww this was really cute, Zack loving all the little scenes of cloud and wanting to be with him. Also, nice smut xD