This was fun while it lasted. Probably one of the most fun things I've read on this site. As much as I'd like to see this continued, I know it was probably abandoned for a reason. I wish you the best of luck with whatever you're doing now.

Fairly sure Ruby herself would kill Yang in cold blood is she thought Salem how to make bad puns.

Nora having angst moments, Jaune not being dense asa rock and Zwei is some OP dog spirit...this is insane even by RWBY standards and I love it.

Well this has been a fantastic and very entertaining read. Little rough around the edges with some grammar issues, and there was too much CAPS LOCK for Nora's speach and others yelling when italics and descriptive adverbs should have been used. And the puns were actually pretty damn awful, though im somewhat positive that was intentional.

That said, it was a lot of fun to read this. I really loved how overblown and ridiculous you made the villians in this, and i just thought the overall nonsense thoughout the story was well balanced. Its a shame you seem to have given up on this, but it was definitely fun while it lasted.

It seemed from your author note that you were not satisfied with the last few chapters quality and the direction the story was taking. From my experience reading rwby fics, the dance arc always seems to cause issues. Authors want to delay important romantic stuff until then, but struggle to actually make it there and have to toss in a lot of.. not filler, but stuff that isnt necessarily needed. Idk if that's what happened here, but i think Cinder losing motivation to kill Jaune and Nora combined with you not really having a bunch of enemies lined up for Zwei in the last few chapters might have kinda derailed things. Maybe, maybe not.

Well regardless, thanos for writing, was enjoyable.

So uh. If Salem can summon a horde of Grimm and a class M Grimm right outside this town, why cant she just do the same for the four major cities?

Not sure if you've figured it out yet per your Author Note at the bottom

But Zwei is actually a trubute to Ein from Cowboy Bebop. Ein means one in german, and he's also a corgi.

Well. This looks like just the sort of nonsense i was interested in finding.

Nora: “BIRDS CAN TALK!?”

Qrow: *sweats nervously*

I vote for "Arc's Cereal and Pancakes" threesome shipping. Don't break Pyrrha's heart man, don't do that to her, don't do that to all the shippers here.

You can make everyone happy, you don't have to break hearts here, you don't have to crush love when you can nurture it instead...

Well, I should be surprised... but I'm really not.

Also, given the number of fics out there with Arcest as the main point, especially the rising number of Jaune x Saphron fanfics, I'm gonna toss my hat in and say...

Siblings or not, I can still pair up Jaune and 'Poli'. Hope he can convince her to change her ways.

It's been nine months since last update... I'm so sorry, just can't resist.

"sometimes it made. a period arrive too early"

top quality pun. had me laughing like an idiot at 8am on a Sunday when everyone else was sleeping

Wow, that clever lil cameo

You sick bastard! How do you make me hate and love this story for mocking the show?!

So, this story is pretty great.

It's an odd conglomeration of Humor, Adventure, Romance, Drama, and small amounts of Angst, but it somehow works really well.

Granted, I really want you to get to the point where Jaune and Nora kiss, but you're making it as hilarious as possible before it gets there.

I really look forward to that part though.