well this was prophetic

HYPE! OMG. KEEP THIS GOING GOOD SIR. YOU ARE AN ANGEL. I'm sorry for your loss.

Can't wait for the main story! But for when it's coming out...THIS IS TORTURE! :'(

Yo, I have a big question. Did you get the idea of Pikachu slipping from THAT Steven Gerrard slip? Cuz that really made me laugh when I thought about it

great

This story has had a really good start! THough I must say, I really,r eally dont want Serena to win Kalos Queen in the show. One: like you said, it'll most likely mean her departure. And two: I find it kind of ridiculous that Serena concurred her dream in just one journey while Ash hasn't. Though, being Kalos Queen definitely isn't anywhere near as prestigious as winning a league (because it's only in one region. It's more akin to like and Orange league victory). But anyway, keep up the good worlk

Nicely written.

Nice story, looking forward to more of this!

I love this story man, what if this happened in the anime lol, also do you wanna do a collaboration sometime soon bcoz I want to start a pokemon fanfic so pm me if you want to CYA

Great story so far!

Unfortunately, they pretty much spoiled that Serena is going to lose the Master Class. Heck, the summary for XY&Z20 is hinting that she's only gonna make it to the Semi-finals; which probably means she's not gonna face Aria for the title. And I'm guessing the "Aria vs. Serena" battle will happen after the Master Class.

But I am glad Serena's gonna lose. Like you said, if Serena loses, she'll get to stay with the XY Gang for a bit longer. As for the Sun/Moon anime, I'm hoping Ash at least goes to the new region with Serena, but we'll just have to wait and see.

Despite my preference of Pearlshipping, I have something to say:

I love the way you set this out. The story is already looking promising and I can't wait for the rest. While I saw one grammar error, it can easily be ignored and this is an otherwise flawless piece of writing. English isn't even your first language and you are showing great promise with this. I admit, the end will be a shame, but this will certainly be an interesting journey. Good luck.