I like Wendy more than I like Erza, but if I had never meant Wendy, I would have gone for Erza

By far one of the Best Naza stories I've ever read! Keep writing stories like this. They're awesome! Hope you write more Natsu/Erza fanfics. Because this Ship rocks!

A VERY GOOD WORK !

It's as has already been said, the fanfics Natsu/Lucy always employ the same and repetitive plot. It's difficult to write fanfics with different plots. And you got it with ths fanfic.

I hope you write more fanfics Natsu/Erza. I think this ship an interesting ship.

Write more about naza !

Yo, how's all?

Damn, this was... really entertaining to read, despite the grammar, typos and continuum changes in verb tenses... you should work on that... eh, whatever, that didn't deter me from reading! In fact, I am glad it went like that! This story was really good, great even, and I haven't read any NaZa stories in a very loooooong while!

Last time I checked, the archive was having this thing of doing the same as the NaLu stories, repeating the same formula over and over for every single story, but this one...? This one really has me pumped up and eager to try to find more NaZa stories to read. You kept them so in-character that it wasn't hard to visualize, the situations weren't bad at all for the two of them to be in, in fact, they were actually so sweet that I almost giggled. Not to mention the end... heheh... that Natsu, always saying the right things despite his mighty obliviousness. *chuckles*

Anyway, great work! Aside the grammar, this was quite the enjoyable story. Pretty good for your first NaZa! I hope you write another one in the future!
Saludos.

Honestly I really like the development in this story

Great and simple fics like this one is what the Fairy Tail section needs. Has been a while since a saw a good NaZa, so thank you :D!

I like all your stories! Are you some sort of genius or something?

OMG. I'm dying. I love it a lot.

I'm not going to lie but it if all of your stories I think this is your best and sweetest one ever

That was nice.

Awesome, can't wait for more stories.

Great story, love Naza, keep writing great stories and experimenting.

ah so much uploads, thanks for the stress reliever! read all 4, nothing bad but I'll re-read again tomorrow and re-check just in-case. Keep up the good work!

It was a really good naza one shot, I'd really like to see more of them, as well as NaMi, xd