Amazing story!

These poor boys are just a hot mess of injuries

that was really sweet! i loved it :)

Yes More please, the story is just getting good. Your doing awesome.

Wowza, this is good. What is up with that paramedic? Yikes, can't wait to read more! Update soon! XOXO

Nice job! Would definitely be excited for another chapter!

I agree - I always wanted to see a little more of Dean looking after Sam after that scene! I think you captured it perfectly :)

Keep going, I'm loving it! :)

Interesting. I like the way you write your dialogue. Looking forward to the next update.

Keep going! Love this so far

I think this is a great start, I always hate that the guys are magically better a scene or two or episode later. I think you've got a great start here. Looking forward to more.

Nice job. The voices were very true to their characters.

Congrats on your first fanfic! I just started myself Jan.1st of this year, and I have a growing collection.
I liked it, I really did. I'm a huge fan of the limp Sam protective Dean. All my stories are geared heavily in that. I WOULD NOT mind another chapter! I like your writing, I think you should keep it up!

Great story! I also thought it wasn't realistic at all, how easily Sam bounced back from that much blood loss. Would love to read more.