This is such a great story. Love the Otter Parts to your writing is awesome and its sad that someone as talented as you stopped writing

I know, that 4 years have passed, but I ask you continue this work. C'mon, I'm from another mainland, there're many fanfic-writers in Eurasia too, but your work is my favorite! It's very interesting. Just continue it please.

can't wait for another part! its so good.

Whoa Robin's schedule sure is hectic. I love the way you write his double (more like triple) life: the team thinks he's with Barbara, Barbara thinks he's with the team, but in reality Robin is getting his ass kicked by Shiva. Super effective example of show, not tell in writing.

I am honestly just on the edge of my seat waiting for all of these lies to blow up in poor Robin's face

Ah I love this series. Especially this story. Poor Robin, everything is just keeps falling apart. I really hope you update again soon

Holy smokes everything is blowing up in Robin's face! This is so exciting ~ I'd love to see more of Shiva and find out what her endgame is.

I also love your writing style: it's witty, concise, and easy to follow. Makes reading your fic feel natural, just like watching an episode of YJ :)

Omg this story is great! Please, if you're still aware of this story, try to update soon. I might die if I don't know the ending to this story.

Pleasee when do u think this will be updated next and even finished ? I LOVE ur work and hooked on the series... cant wait for this book ... thanks please reply :D

Update please this is really goof

I know you probably won't see this because you're most likely a very busy person, but I just wanted to say that you're a famtastic writer. I love the way you're twisting with Dick's head. I think that with the path you've gone down on in this series that there are several key questions you could really look at for ideas to add to the plot:

Where is Dick's breaking point? We all know everyone has one.

If he is broken, what does that mean for his future? Is he going to be broken in a way that he follows the bad guy, or in a way that he just loses his grip on humanity? Or something else?

Will Dick and Artemis ever really talk about what happened to them in the first book? As in, really talk and bond even further?

And of course: at what point, if at all, will the heroes finally realize that he is in fact not okay?

Again, love the stories and the way you write. I can't wait to see what you decide to do next!

Tu as un bon jour, mon ami!
-Emily

I spent the last two days marathoning all your Young Justice stories, and damn, I'm hooked. I love how you write Dick and his interactions with everyone else. And I really love how you shut down Chalant; I never liked that pairing because it felt so rushed in the show. I can't wait for the next chapter, I love this series! :D

This is so good! I hope it updates soon! I love your works! :)

I'm loving the new story! It has so much potential! Please keep the updates coming!

Just went through fhe entire series starting from Roots in a week. Pardon my language, but I am fucking loving this series, especially this story! Kepp up the good work!

Please continue writing. I am really enjoying this series. Perhaps make dick get more jealous and run away?