I had just started up on this one so I hope it's not too late to leave my own comments but I've thoroughly enjoyed this one.

I would really like to see this one continue now that you're be back or well any Arkos story.

I would personally focus on this, is one of your better stories so far and a great what if in general. Merry Christmas and Happy new year.

please update

muito bom.

não faça jaune fraco por favor. sempre ele é fraco nas istórias. faça ele um guerreiro talentoso.

e jaune vai se tornar um cassador também? não faça ele fraco.

Awesome story, i can't wait to see the rewrite. I'll read Arkos book soon as possible and i hope you will return soon with all of your work and eternal life to Arkos!

The onlyproblem I see in the story so far is the production of black dust dust is mind not made.

well im looking forward to it, don't let people's hate take you down or make you give up, its nice to know what other people think but you should make up what you want, that's what's important.

if you don't mind could you leave this story just unfinished and redo in another story (I dunno how to explain this lol).

Thank you this is really my favorite story of yours, super happy to hear it we ill continue! !

Honestly, in these kind of situations, the best option is to follow your gut instinct. This is YOUR story and the final decision is YOURS, regardless of the poll results.

That said I personally think that rewriting the whole story is a bad thing, because you might just end up running into the same problem all over again. If I was in your shoes, I would choose option (3) and do my best to clean up the story as best I can.

Oh for crying out loud. You have a portal device! Open a portal to the middle of nowhere and throw the bomb through!

Plus, who hooks up a dead man's switch to a timer?

I think the logic of that scene needs work. It's more than a bit contrived.

I'd go with option 2, I didn't think the last chapter was bad maybe a bit dark, but its up to you what you want to do with the story, I also wouldn't mind the full rewrite given more time to read about jaune and phyrra as kids, one think I will note though given the environment I don't think it would make sence for all the kindomes to go for the hunter deathsquads thd wording is wsy yo hash even withe the atack on the sumit it just likly to spark a war.

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