aw man.. Maybe a part two happens later and they can have some fun for real lol

That was great! It felt like it fit in with the Anime so well, haha wish it were true

I've written stories in the dream perspective before, they are always so amusing.

I loved it! It was well written, well thought out, and kept the characters in character, I think (The anime doesn’t really depict Ema’s Character that well so it’s hard to tell). You are an excellent writer and I personally found the twist to be very humorous.

Oh! I'm sorry I forgot make a fanfiction about Kaname and Ema and Ukyo and Ema it was just a offend OK TY

No flames right ,OK not bad

Absolutely loved this. It was well written, had great detail, and supported my ship from the anime. The only thing I didn't like was that it was a dream. XD

Nooooooo it was only a dream! (个_个)
Anyway, my disappointment at the dream aside, this is well-written（ω）

Wow! I don't normally read smut but it was Natsume so... I really enjoyed this, it was well written and the story flowed really well. Also I loved the fact that it was a dream! It made their relationship feel more realistic (can you say that anime feels realistic? :) ) ,less rushed and it left the ending open to the imagination of where the story could lead to. So yeah, I loved it! Thank you for the awesome story XD

I liked this story, the fact that you made it a dream was great because you can see what Natsume thinks but you didnt take Emma out of her character. Great job

aahh i hate you, hahaha but i really like this

U should have made it actually happened it was so beautiful

Oh my goodness! I absolutely loved that! I started laughing when it turned out to be a dream. I mean, come on, Natsume. You're not a teenager anymore. Wet dreams SHOULD be a thing of the past. I honestly loved it though! Good job.

Omg ugh, you should really continue

What a twist! Still hot though! I do ship them hard!