That was an awesome chapter!

This was a good read. I’m anxious for a new chapter.

This is a great story! I know it's been awhile since you've updated, but I would love to see it finished. In addition, once I finish this review, I'm heading over to your profile to see if I can find anymore yummy FreLu stories to satisfy my cravings!

I've immensely enjoyed reading your story up to this point. You've done a wonderful job with Freed's character and especially the platonic relationship he shares with Laxus. This story is definitely steamy and well-written. I do hope that your passion for this story comes back one day, but until then, take whatever time you need.

Take your time, and do what you need to do. I know I'll still be here waiting to see what happens next. May your Muse came back and inspire your to write once more.

Oh wow! That was well written and detailed.

Please update soon

Update soon please..

update please~

Please update soon!

Ahhhhh I hope he didn't spoil everything with the last remark!
Their kiss was definitely hot, haha!
I really enjoy this story, can't wait for another chapter :)

IM YELLIIIINGGGGGGG
I LOVE IT AHHHAAAAA

Good god I love this! That first chapter I choked on my drink because it was so hilarious.

I agree, even though NaLu is canon it sucks. It's why I love fanfic so much because we can develop Lucy's character more than just getting naked and having Natsu save her.

I feel you on writer's block. What helps me is writing down what I know I want to happen in the story; just bullet points. Then I try and write a chapter in a single setting. Even if it's bare bones. Then I wait a day or two and give it some meat.

But I really do love this story and you are very gifted. I think you have developed Freed very well and I can't wait for Lucy to get back to see how Freed handles the situation. I believe on you!

This is so great! I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next!

This story is so good and I hope u update soon with some lovely lemon with freed and Lucy