| Reviews for Spirits: The Primordial Being |
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   Monster King chapter 23 . 5/30 Awesomeness |
| XenoLucifer chapter 23 . 9/12/2019 Why is it always the good stories that are discontinued? damn it. And is there a reason why the page states that this is a Naruto/Ruby pairing even though it's obviously a Naruto/Glynda one? |
| Guest chapter 23 . 9/18/2018 dear writer please make more chapters |
| biob1 chapter 16 . 8/27/2018 Good job |
| biob1 chapter 8 . 8/27/2018 Really enjoying this story |
| biob1 chapter 7 . 8/27/2018 Great work |
| DuckedHard chapter 10 . 6/18/2018 It's not "would", it's "will". |
| Onedeath Infinitelives chapter 23 . 6/18/2018 I like your story, honestly I do but the pacing and the world setting right now doesn't agree with me, no disrespect to you as an author but I just can't bring myself to read it anymore cause my taste in literature is a bit different from what your writing. No flaming of course but i did enjoy your other works better. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/17/2018 The way he awakened his Rinnegan makes sense. Finally another writer who knows what they're doing! |
| Drakon45 chapter 23 . 6/17/2018 Seriously? All that wait time for a flashback? You know what that is called in show business terms? Filler. I hate filler. But it is a good story so you do what you want to. Just try to keep flashbacks at a minimum if possible. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2018 How did I miss this story? It's so good, so far. |
| Grounded Forever chapter 22 . 5/19/2018 Good chapter |
| austinpowers97 chapter 22 . 5/15/2018 wow what an amazing chapter this was it so great to see an update for this story especially when we are finally about to really see the shit hit the fan. great work as always cant wait to see what is to come |
| DragFire chapter 22 . 5/13/2018 Wow so much happenned in this episode. Thanks for the update! |
| catze86 chapter 22 . 5/13/2018 Awesome. |
