Reviews for The Right One |
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inuyasha16451 chapter 4 . 6/3 Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon |
PurpleArrowhead chapter 4 . 5/26 lol |
cagats chapter 4 . 1/13 Lovely please continue to update this soon would love to see how it ends |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/7/2019 This should be adventure/parody it's to all over the place for anything else |
Cool Story Bro chapter 4 . 10/1/2017 I like this story so far but it seems you never continued it. Well just telling you i liked it and if you could continue it that be pretty cool |
Canada and Kumajiro chapter 4 . 2/20/2017 Thantos watched in amusement oh the things you could see when nobody knew you were watching wasnt it the reason why he createx the invisibility cloak it was to gain blackmail material on his boss hades ever to fire him not that Thantos was irreceble the best oaragraph ever |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/18/2016 Plz plz plz don't abandon! It's hard to find a decent fic like this! I love the way the characters are portrayed:-) |
Hikari Nova chapter 4 . 9/13/2016 okay very much humor filled filler chapter |
Hikari Nova chapter 2 . 9/13/2016 some minor grammar errors but interesting so far |
huskielover94 chapter 4 . 8/1/2016 this is great.. cant wait for more |
Crimsonkat9 chapter 4 . 6/12/2016 holy shit this story is hilarious! I lie it! Please continue this wonderful masterpiece! |
Firehedgehog chapter 4 . 5/8/2016 snort, very nice with lotsa crack |
loretta537 chapter 4 . 5/4/2016 this is a good story so far, I hope to read more soon |
god of all chapter 4 . 4/25/2016 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
AstralGemini chapter 4 . 4/25/2016 danmd cliff hangers |