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inuyasha16451 chapter 4 . 6/3
Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon
PurpleArrowhead chapter 4 . 5/26
lol
cagats chapter 4 . 1/13
Lovely please continue to update this soon would love to see how it ends
Guest chapter 2 . 11/7/2019
This should be adventure/parody it's to all over the place for anything else
Cool Story Bro chapter 4 . 10/1/2017
I like this story so far but it seems you never continued it. Well just telling you i liked it and if you could continue it that be pretty cool
Canada and Kumajiro chapter 4 . 2/20/2017
Thantos watched in amusement oh the things you could see when nobody knew you were watching wasnt it the reason why he createx the invisibility cloak it was to gain blackmail material on his boss hades ever to fire him not that Thantos was irreceble the best oaragraph ever
Guest chapter 4 . 12/18/2016
Plz plz plz don't abandon! It's hard to find a decent fic like this! I love the way the characters are portrayed:-)
Hikari Nova chapter 4 . 9/13/2016
okay very much humor filled filler chapter
Hikari Nova chapter 2 . 9/13/2016
some minor grammar errors but interesting so far
huskielover94 chapter 4 . 8/1/2016
this is great.. cant wait for more
Crimsonkat9 chapter 4 . 6/12/2016
holy shit this story is hilarious! I lie it! Please continue this wonderful masterpiece!
Firehedgehog chapter 4 . 5/8/2016
snort, very nice with lotsa crack
loretta537 chapter 4 . 5/4/2016
this is a good story so far, I hope to read more soon
god of all chapter 4 . 4/25/2016
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
AstralGemini chapter 4 . 4/25/2016
danmd cliff hangers
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