the big brotherhood is fucken terrified now.

Good good

Good

Im not done yet, getting there, but its very good. First time I've teared up reading a book in awhile. Great Writing, Plot and everything else. I love it all.

What caused me to write this now instead of when I finish, is that I am a bit of a gun nut myself, and chapter 12 started to trigger me a bit. The Desert Eagle fires .50 caliber AE cartridges. (Action Express) Which is different from 50 mm rounds. (Which would be 50 milimetres in diameter or .50 mm rounds which would be the smaller than the width of the wire used in making paper clips.)

Though there are some small messups, this is a GREAT story and well worth a read. Compliments to the Author for a great few days as I read this series.

Both your previous story and this one are excellent reads...I've read them before, in fact. I just wanted to drop a line and comment that I don't quite understand why so many people love the Railroad. In my playthroughs, I join them just long enough to get the Ballistic Fiber mod...and then drop the axe.
(Maybe I'm just an a! h#le?)
Thank you for one of the best Fallout 4 reads on this site.

I wouldn’t want to be on the end of a 45 or a DE. 9mm and 22’s you can survive. You hit someone with a 45 and up they might as well be 6 feet under.

I see someone's been playing Mass Effect and watching A Few Good Men. ;)
Still, amazing story, better than the first one.

just for the sake of argument, gauss rifles are ballistic. they use a magnetic charge to propel a small projectile.

Apparently Lucy has seen, or read the screenplay for, Terminator.

She scary...

The cliff hangars make it more interesting

oh My God. I am tearing up from this chapter. I love it.

How dare Teagan

My God. Another cliff hangar. and did you mean to say tech was scarce in the capital wasteland?

new Vegas's fate and just how truly badass the lone wanderer is. -gasp-