I absolutely love everything about this.

nice work

very good.

I liked the chapter!11

The Emperor never did anything wrong
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA best line in this thing.

i NEED a chapter 2

Killroy? Seriously? That's what people are calling me now?

"My rank must remain a secret" oh, ok Inquisitor...wasn't hard.

I didn't create a rift buddy. It was always there. People always hated being treated like cattle. I just gave them the words to display their anger. Faith is something earned. The Emperor has earned my faith. The commanders of the Imperium (Especially the fucker Kubrik Chenkov) have not, mainly because they're all too busy drinking paint thiner.

I wouldn't joke that everything is heresy if it wasn't for the fact that that seems to be the Imperium's actual policy! Including common sense, speaking up, and individuality.

Ah yes, so I am a cultist to the squid with the complexity addiction for saying "Things would be better if we used our damn brains!"

If 36 is a good rule if the commander is an idiot, people are going to need to use it all the time. Again, Kubirk Chenkov.

Question champ. What makes the fellows in the ivory towers less expendable than us? And I have to question a thousand of me being worth as much as Cato Sicuntius. Pretty basic really. You ask us to die because you don't care about us and care more about sucking off the blue bloods.

See, that seems to be the problem with you. You say I should take a lasbolt for my sister. I'd rather just kill the cultist before he opens fire.

I consider myself more of a realist than a defeatist. That's where we differ.

(Seriously though, nice work)

That ending... I cried...

Quite good

I see epicness over here..keep going men

I am slowly clapping. This is really spot on. If i may interject the greatest of all Cosmic Horror is not something found in a detach obscure place. But rather it is in found within the human heart and i cannot possibly comment anymore on it.

interesting, definetly shows some things you need to do in the imperium...just dont ask about what the wastefulness of the ultramarine's 2nd company did when they got magnus out of the eye of terror...

how they did it shall never be known but know this...it was that damned second company that did it somehow.

well strap me to a nuke and i'll stranglove the thing right up the enemy's ass

And in my story I am going to deconstruct this particular piece of info on the basis that blind obedience can lead to manipulation by the wiles of old Tze, as there have been hints sowed across the books that the Emperor is one of the Chaos God's many pawns. Secondly I actually have this deranged idea that the Imperium's worshipping of the Emperor is actually creating a new nascent warp god of order and stability, but also of oppression and injustice. If you see BanterHorse's Dark Age of War, you might get what I'm hinting at. In that story he mentions how the ancient branch of humanity had a front seat to the collapse of the Eldar Empire, and this spurs the aforementioned faction to spurn the evolution of human as a psychic species.

Secondly I recommend that you read the Soul Drinker story; This novel has MANY ideas that I am trying to incorporate.

The Reason this is called the "Heretic's" unlifting primer is because, to the anti-common-sense policies, everything Erttheking wrote in his "Ways to avoid death" would, in fact, be considered "Heresy" according to the backwards bureaucratic morass of the Adeptus Administratum. Counter to what Erttheking's written piece of work encourages, Imperial Law largely works on the basis of blind faith and supreme confidence in the abilities of the Imperium and the people serving in it. The very idea that you should think for yourself opens doorways to doubt, and doubt spawns dissent, and dissent spawns rebellion. So, in inquisitorial circles, it was indeed considered A Heretic's work of literature.

This unnamed official saw that the publishing of this illegal primer was going to continue regardless of how the Imperial Inquisition attempted to stamp it out, and he said "We can't fight it, we can only oversee it. Roll with it and run damage control".