Spectacular sequel! :-D I can so see Jim making all sorts of puns now about being the 'other man' in John's life. :-)

I can also see Jim playing with John's Dreams to his own benefit by setting up a failsafe in case he dies. That is, if Jim gets killed then Moran or some other underling will kill Sherlock, but only after clearly stating the where, when, how and- if possible- who of Jim's death to the Detective.
John would be SO pissed about it the first time it happens, Sherlock too. Though it would give them leverage to get out of the Game for a while. :-)

So, after rereading Dreamer I was like bout time I read some more from this fantastic writer and imagine my delight when I found this unexpected present! I haven't even checked yet, but there will be more, right? I love this! Is it terrible how much I love when Jim and John interact. Or how much I enjoy John's conflict over the kiss. So, happy about Sherlocks retaliation to that. I love those to together, but I just eat up the tension Jim creates. So good! Thanks for another great read. Will have to read this again too! :)

Omg! Gah I love the dynamic between them. Amazing!

love it! It was awesome and you're awesome for writing this

Hahaha, oh, love it! And of course he wouldn't give up, there's a lot of ways to break up a marriage, after all.

love it love it love it..

Haaaaaahaaaaaaahaaaaaaa... heeeeeeheeeeeheeeeeeheeeeee... I LOVE THIS SO DAMN MUCH!
PLEASE will you write a sequel?!
You are an AMAZING writer!

Love it! Don't suppose you can do more? And a little more Sherly loosing? Truth be told I'm on Jim's team so I just thought I could ask.

I loved this! It was the perfect sequel.

Uh Oh!

Brilliant! Oh, I am so pleased to see more from this story. :D