Why not have naruto become the Vaults All a rounder

FUCKING UPDATE ALREADY! IT"S BEEN TWO YEARS! WE NEED MORE!

When will this be updated?

Honestly would love to see an update for this, i was surprised to see that despite the scenario that this didn’t just become a rapid fire porn flick that only has action when it’s suited.

It's nice to see a fic like this being taken into serious consideration instead of being used as glorified porn. I like a lemon every once in a while to spice up a good story but with how most people seem to lose control of their own baser instincts when they write stories like these it just completely ruins what could have been an excellent time killer.

To be honest I never liked how authors increased breast or ass sizes based on their own preferences. Sakura for example never actually grew a pair of visible beasts unless your talking about Naruto: The last or Boruto. But in that case she had a daughter so of course her cup size increased to feed her child. All I'm saying is I prefer authors stick with the given characteristics of canon unless the story needs the change. Otherwise it's just unneeded hassle.

I'd actually like to see Finis in this story from the Netflix series "Lost Song". Her role would be, as it was in canon, songstress to help improve moral. She's got a voice I could listen to for hours. Just writing about her has me wanting to listen to the last song of the anime the song of beginning. Of course that was actually sung as a duet but i won't go into that.

Backstory for the fic though is something I'm unsure about. Part of me kinda Hope's it would stick with canon, but it might not fit with what you have in store for later on. Nor do I think it's possible considering she was basically suicidal close to the end of the fic. But for this I might have something special. From a young age she's sung songs in a way that others haven't been capable of replicating. Her family traveled a lot so she spent her early childhood on the go moving from place to place and one day she was separated from her parents. Lost, scared and alone she hummed a song her mother sang to her every night in order to keep calm. Unknown to her she had wandered into a much more rundown section of the town she was in, touched by the cold war being held between the nations. Her humming attracted the attention of everyone around her and when she subconsciously sang to herself the entire street listened with their emotions swelling from her sweet young voice.

When her parents finally found her she was being looked after by a pair of local hoodlums that heard her singing. Touched by her soft words they decided they wanted to do more with themselves and for others who shared their current predicament. As thanks they wat hed over her until she was retrieved. Those same hoodlums complimented the ecstatic parents about their daughter and her talent for touching the hearts of those she sang to.

Ever since then whenever she stopped into a town her first stop would be to what many would call the red light district in order to sing for the people who she felt she needed to connect with. This habit following her into adulthood where her songs are revered by all and despite the numerous talent agencies that wanted to recruit her she never once considered staying from her path to touch the poor souls of the unfortunate. At least until she was approached by Tsunade herself in order to extend the invitation for the vault herself after explaining the current situation to her. Despite her desire to continue traveling and singing she felt her place, the place she could do the most good, was with tsunade in vault 69.

A question I feel needs to be asked. Despite canon Tsunade being a more than capable kage she was more commonly known as the greatest practitioner of medicine that had been alive second only to her her apprentice Sakura after the war. So why is she the overseer when she would probably make for a better head of the medical facilities? Shizune and Mabui are probably in the best positions for themselves but I would be swaying towards shizune staying with tsunade.

The first lemon probably should have been in this chapter though. I'm thinking it would have been good for development in their character if we saw how Naruto, chloe, and max acted behind closed doors with their baser instincts coming into play. Adrenaline is high, higher cognitive brain functions are slowed or dulled and passion takes the drivers seat. It offers a good insight into who the characters are as people without the threat of being judged hanging over their head. And admittedly I was somewhat looking forward to that lemon in particular. A narutoXchlieXmax threesom lemon I have bot seen before so I found it VERY interesting.

update soon

honestly, I like it and hope to see a new update soon

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i hope that you will update this soon :)

5 months and still waiting for a chapter. WHY IS IT THAT EVERY INTERESTING FIC GOES WITHOUT AN UPDATE GODDAMNIT!?

hen the hell you gonna update?

Honestly, when I was first looking through this crossover and saw this, I thought it was just gonna be porn. But, now that I've actually read it, I'm happy I picked it up because it sounds actually really cool. I like the premise, and the reasoning behind a lot of the things you implemented. Either way, please keep writing this story, for it is actually really good and I would enjoy it continuing, along with a multitude of others.

Can you please update it?

Carrot and Wanda from one piece may work into the story as a form of mutant made by a modified version of the fev virus, same goes for other no human , like Mia or suu from daily life with monster girls, but hey your choice.

UUPDAATEEEEE