Really hope to see another chapter whenever you have the time my man. It has potential to be a good story.

Nice story, but gave me goosebumps when I saw the 'Thankee-sai' part. If I'm not wrong that is thank you or thank thee in High speech from Stephen King. Is the mirror by any chance the mirror from the Reaper's Image, that would be frightening (awesome but frightening). Hope you update soon.

When is the next update?
It's not bad.

Very good start for the Oc fanfic. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter. Also the future Oc x Akeno paring is a good call.

Please consider shifting away from first person pov

An awesome OC with an awesome power to boot! I really love how this fic is going to be a singular pairing, not enough of those in the DxD fandom. I look forward to the following chapters:)

Good sir you just made my day! It's 03:00am here and i was going to sleep, but when i found out that you updated i just had to read it. Magnificent work, hope you to updated soon. This story feel's like a rollercoaster, slowly going to the peak and rush down. I have feeling that when the rush begining's, it will be when all the fun begining's. I wish you good writing moments and healt.

The beginning is out of the ordinary; I like the focus on a task and character besides the MC, and the chapter stays decent afterwards. The MC's mysterious training is embarrassing, though. But what has he been doing each day? He's lacking purpose, but isn't laid back enough to prefer inactivity. A couple of misspellings, peak instead of peek and week instead of weak, but excellent proofreading overall. Yea, I dislike all the heavy-handed flirting, subtler would be better, but at least the single pairing is different from the norm.

really good please dont drop its so promising

Very promising indeed. Waiting next chapteris. Keep up! :)

I like it and I hope this story won't be short and really go through all the Volumes! Your OC is well made! Does his Control over Incinerate Anthem resembles Enton: Kagutsuchi? And I personally always liked the pairing with Akeno. Holy Lightning and Holy Fire to add! Nice job! Update soon!

Hate to this but I don't think I'll be catching on to this story, sorry.

Not bad. But he shoud join Grigori.

I like the stories about an OC not becoming a devil. They are so rare and refreshing to see. Hope Tai never becomes a devil and just becomes a neutral person in the supernatural society that goes with all three factions instead of just one. Meaning, i hope he takes missions from either factions, getting him better experience with different problems that he will face with having such a powerful Longinus.

good chapter so for I love it a lot and I cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and I bet akeno will some wow will talk to him in to the group some wow I bet she can do to for rias in this story big time and I bet it will take a long time for him to do at one in this story big time