The fact that this story has to be rewritten is a fucking travesty, I was hooked on this right from the get go, I couldn't help but wonder that if this story was longer, how you would've handled things like the God Valley incident which happened roughly 16 or so years before Roger got executed. The original chapters are great BTW, taking time off is fine but if/when you return, expanding off of what you already have would be entertaining rather than a new story over from scratch.

It was an awesome read. I binged it at 3am. I just hope you give Roger's personality more depth. He's acting almost like Luffy. I'll enjoy it more if you gave Roger one or two distinct traits.

I would like to read this story more thoughtful and serious! Roger is a little TOO LOOFI here. Almost no of his personal character traits (even if you, as the author, invented them). I will read with pleasure, as a rewritten or continued story. It seems to me that your characters are what you need for this story. Expand it, add a lot of your own. In fact, it is more an original that would be closely intertwined with the canon.

I'd be happy to read anything you want to post :)
I really like this story and either a rewrite or a contiuation would be seriously great!
(I think if I had to choose though I'd like the rewrite more :))
OC's are okay with me as well.
Greetings
G1ntsuk1

I wish MY first word was bastard.

I love the story. I don't really like oc so for u can stick with roger and ace

Hey! I didn't expected that you were still around paying atention to this story!
Personally I prefer to rewrite the story, but I don't care if either you delete this story or published the rewrite like a new story. What you want is good for me.
By the way, I love the fact that you're not doing importants OCs! I hate all the mary sues and that stuf. The importants OCs usually ended ruining an story (not always, I don't want to harm anyone feelings) and personally I feel relieved I you promised it alredy.
I'll be waiting for the rewrite of the story! Good luck!

Bye bye, SK.

PS: It's really great that you're thinking about rewriting this because I don't even remember the plot of this fic anymore XD

please keep writing this story all the unanswered questions have created so much suspense it would be really irritating if the answers were never written.

hi author, I am glad you're back, since I really love your story! i can't believe you're not that fond of it, cause I think it's a good story line, as it is so unique. honestly I would also love a rewriting that focuses on the bond of the two, since I think there is a lot to write on. btw I don't know how far you are with one piece, but if you were to to read the newest chapter's, there is some more information about Roger..
I won't say more about that
it would be very kind I'd you still saved the current chapter's, I love rereading stories and also to compare rewritings with the old version!
thanks for coming back and I look forward to your future works!

Hi Mystery!

I'd very much love to read anything if you wish to rewrite this fic, do let us know if you start uploading the rewrite? And if possible, please leave old version online? Even if you do feel it is bad- I believe you are feeling as bad as I do when I read back the stories I wrote around a decade ago back in school.. I still look back and always remember how much fun I had writing those, or the characters I've fallen in love with, even if many parts of them make me cringe in presentation and style...

Of course, whether you decide to leave them online or not, is purely depends on you as the author.

Hope you and your acquaintances are healthy in this difficult time!

If you want to rewrite it then that's fine with me. OCs are not a problem with me. If you want more info on Roger's character then you can read at least between chapters 969-973 of One Piece manga. Excuse me if I'm wrong.

I love your work! That being said, I would love to read more on Ace and Rodger’s relationship. I will admit that it felt kind of rushed. Would they have a better, stronger bond? Would Ace become friends with Rouge? With Whitebeard? I’m excited for the new, fresh chapters!
However, I don’t think you should delete the chapters you already wrote.

Okay so I adore this story, but I think havong it being rewriten is better, since you grew as a writter an derson and have a different view now of how the story will go. So Im up for rewritting.

Second I dont mind OCs as long as they are written well or entertaining. But I also do want to see more brotherly development between Ace and Roger.

Third I would actually suggest posting on AO3, its waaaay easier to use. I also went over to there and only use this website to read instead of posting stories.

Hope you are staying safe :3

Hello there,
Well, sometimes OCs are inevitable, and they can add uniqueness to your story, take Ace of Spade from himmelblu for example, there are some OCs but they don’t take too much focus and I tend to find them greatly integrated in the story.

If you want to rewrite your story, go for it! Especially if you don’t like your first storyline and it can be easier to start something from scratch than to continue an existing story.
Also, I think that you should let this story up, maybe just put a Discontinued (or something like that) in the resume), and start a new fic. If you do so don’t forget to inform us !
But in the end, the choice is yours, do what you think is the best !

See you soon !

Best of luck with everything you choose, maybe wait for the end of Wano and decide.