Judy is being so petty in this story. Ooooo a growl and I'm never talking to you again

The argument didn't flow and was illogical, the plot was confused and nonsensical, the characters were exaggerated caricatures and did not behave in a way befitting of any rational, sentient creature, let alone Hopps and Wilde. The only thing I can say is ... nice grammar (?)

i prefer the one wih the vegeance but not served cold but served well

*At the scouts' reactions to Nick*...You're telling me they have NO idea of what they did to poor Nick long term wise with their stunt back then? *Pissed and incredulous*

An interesting idea but I think the ending is too abrupt and anticlimactic. The dialogue also needs better separation so readers aren't confused as to who is speaking.

malditos no se salieron con la suya

pobrecito nick

ajaja nick parecela esposa jaja

ajjaa eso judi directo en la treta jaja

cielos desgraciados

cielos la cosa se pone dura

ho vaya

hay la ira mala consejera

hay ya metio la pata

cielos lo entiendo aún me duelen las burlas de los niños no tanto como antes pero te marcan