Not sure why Emerald would've been sent out here to harass her. Yang's clearly losing it.

Also, so good to see you updating again, Legal. I missed you. :)

The plot thickens! I love it!

Adam?on the Patch?

Wonder if she's actually seeing Adam. So soon? That would be so hard...

It's not actually Adam, is it? Is it Raven? I bet it's Raven.

Woah. Good stuff. I love how you keep them in character. Looking forward to reading more!

Wow, this is really superb all round. You really nailed Tai as a father, I'm looking forward to reading more of this, it's one of the few angst fics I've actually liked because it's both believable and relatable.
There's no "dues angst machina" where everyone dies and it's just a solid wall of angst, the way Yang "keeps moving forward" through out the fic is really good for stopping it becoming too depressing. Also the way you explored themes of Tai and Raven compared to Yang and Blake are both deep and original, so credit to you there.

Overall I loved it, and I hope you continue it, if not, I hope this is exactly the angle the show takes. You've done good legal. Damn good.

Not bad.

I don't think I have seen a story about Tai actually going with Yang to look for Blake before. It's

Good move Taiyang. Be the dad you were always meant to be.

Legal did a thing. Wing's heart hurts.