Please update soon.

OMG... I am in stitches from laughing too much. This is hilarious.

Update... Update... Update Please...

BTW, Kalo dialog nggak ush pake "-...". Langsung aja "...". Meskipun itu nyambung dari yang keputus juga langsung aja.

So where does the island come in? Considering it's the title... also is the whitebeards going to meet future strawhats? It'll be interesting, sort of. And I have no idea where this is going but it's really funny. Just how Hancock acts in general. I hope you update soon~~

i like it hope you updated soon.

I like this story. It's awesome and amazing. The idea is unique. Keep up the great work! :)

Poor Ace... his ears must be bleeding :/

But nice chapter again just done minor grammar issues but otherwise good

Oooh, interesting story! If Luffy is 16 and still in the East Blue, I wonder how he met Hancock? Also, do you think Luffy will ever make an appearance in this story?

Wow the last description of Luffy was really good.
But don't you think Hancock would have showed Luffys picture to whitebeard pirates. Hancock must have a lot of Luffys picture you know like his wanted posters etc.

Hi Tiffany!(actually, can i call you like that?) Don't you worry that much about whether your chapter bad or not. I've been following you for a really small time but I really like your stories:) It's ok if your native language is not English, your writing skill and grammar are improving with every time you write a new chapter, right?) As about me, Im not a native neither, and my writing sucks and i don't write fanfics. But those people like you light my life up with every story, so don't be upset, Tiffany) I and some others are here with you!

Glad to help, and the cookies are delicious! :-D

Chuckled through the whole 'brother' hijinks, funny POVs overall

LOL that they think Hancock is sincere since no-one could PRETEND to be that stupidly lovesick

...that really is one of the best descriptions I have read for him. Thank you!

Please write more this is amazing
Can't wait to see what happens next :)

Whooo! You updated! That was funny especially when they realized that the grave sickness nyonba was talking about is Love Sickness! I really like Ace's reaction to Honcock's declaration of being sister-in-law and I can't wait to see more of it! It's hilarious!

Pls. Continue and Update!

Nice start so far! Can't wait to read more

Love it!